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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter • Say how you feel about his performance • Give details of your musical activities • Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter • Say how you feel about his performance • Give details of your musical activities • Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities 5YEB

Dear Baiju Sir, I am writing this letter to express how I felt in your last live performance in Mumbai. I was there at the show when you were playing along with other great musicians. I couldn’t take my eyes off you when you were playing guitar and taking the whole spotlight away from the other artist in between your solo. Even I like to play guitar and I’m learning it for the last 5 years though my skills are not that perfect as yours even I had tried performing in few music festivals. I love playing acoustic most of the time with my band but nowadays I am even learning Bass too. I know even you have an institute in Mumbai where you teach students and give guitar lessons. Would you kindly give me a chance to learn under you and brush up my skills apart from that I would also like to learn a lot about bass which you might be able to teach me as you’re exceptional in playing it? Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Yash.

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Baiju
 Sir,

I am writing this letter to express how I felt in your last This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 performance in Mumbai. I was there at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 when you were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdance
playing
 along with other great musicians. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 couldn’t take my eyes off you when you were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdance
playing
 guitar and taking the whole spotlight away from the other artist in between your solo.

Even I like to play guitar and I’m learning it for the last 5 years though my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 are not that perfect as yours even I had tried performing in few music festivals. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdance
playing
 acoustic most of the time with my band This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 nowadays I am even learning Bass too. I know even you have an institute in Mumbai where you teach students and give guitar lessons.

Would you kindly give me a chance to learn under you and brush up my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 apart from that I would also
 like to learn a lot about bass which you might be able to teach me as you’re exceptional in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdance
playing
 it?

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully
,

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