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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work a0Yd
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in working in your museum as a part-time employee. I heard through the grapevine that you are looking for people who can help the museum with some unpaid work. I have always been interested in arts since my childhood. It had been my childhood dream to work for a museum. As I have just completed my graduation in History, I would like to work for the museum so that I can not only enrich my communication skills but also gain valuable work experiences. I am good at handling clients and can also work a museum guide. Apart from this, I am good at doing accounts and this would definitely be an asset to the finance department as they can rely on me at any time of the day. Since I completed my studies only recently, I want to utilize this week to spend time with my loved ones, and starting next week I would be available to work. Please note that I will be able to work only work on alternate days as I have the responsibility to look after my parents. I hope you will consider my application and allow me to work for your prestigious museum. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jim Taylor
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in working in your
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museum
as a part-time employee. I heard through the grapevine that you are looking for
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people
who can
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help
the
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museum
with
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some
unpaid work.

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I
have always
been interested
in arts since my childhood. It had been my childhood dream to
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work
for a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
. As I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
completed my graduation in History, I would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
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so
that I can not
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only
enrich my communication
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skills
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but
also
gain valuable
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work
experiences. I am
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good
at handling clients and can
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
guide. Apart from this, I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
at doing accounts and this would definitely be an asset to the finance department as they can rely on me at any time of the day.

Since I completed my studies
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
recently, I want to utilize this week to spend time with my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
loved
ones, and starting
next
week I would be available to
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work
.
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Please
note that I will be able to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
on alternate days as I have the responsibility to look after my parents.

I hope you will consider my application and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
for your prestigious museum.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jim Taylor
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work

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  American English
8 paragraphs
219 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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