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The street where you live is in poor condition. Write a letter to local City Council in your letter you Explain the situation Explain the likely consequence Describe the change you expect to occur

The street where you live is in poor condition. Write a letter to local City Council in your letter you Explain the situation Explain the likely consequence Describe the change you expect to occur 3aWeN
Dear sir, I am a resident of Goodwill society and writing to show my concerns over the ever declining standard of the main street in the society. The main street has proudly been a linkage between city and main town for years. However, over past two years the situation of the street is deteriorating. There are cracks all over, it is totally overgrown with weeds and accumulated with that leaves and twings from trees on the it's sides. I am very concerned that the pits on it are major hazards to children and elderly who can easily have serious accidents. Moreover, as rainy season is about to began so there is every possibility that these cracks will be flooded with rainwater, becoming breeding place to Malaria causing mosquitoes. With rain, heaps of decaying plants remains can be washed into draine causing the blockage of sewerage system. As a preventive measure, I believe that repair work should be done immediately including filling of all cracks, uprooting of weeds and removal of decaying leaves and twings. I Hope you find my concern genuine and take immediate corrective action. Thanking you in anticipation. Your sincerely, Meenakshi Kalyan
Dear sir,

I am a resident of Goodwill society and writing to
show
my concerns over the ever declining standard of the main street in the society.

The main street has
proudly
been a linkage between city and main town for years.
However
, over past two years the situation of the street is deteriorating. There are cracks all over, it is
totally
overgrown with weeds and accumulated with that
leaves
and
twings
from trees on
the it
's sides.

I am
very
concerned that the pits on it are major hazards to children and elderly who can
easily
have serious accidents.
Moreover
, as rainy season is about
to began
so
there is every possibility that these cracks will
be flooded
with rainwater, becoming breeding place to Malaria causing mosquitoes. With rain, heaps of decaying plants remains can
be washed
into
draine
causing the blockage of sewerage system. As a preventive measure, I believe that repair work should
be done
immediately including filling of all cracks, uprooting of weeds and removal of decaying
leaves
and
twings
.

I Hope you find my concern genuine and take immediate corrective action.

Thanking you in anticipation.

Your
sincerely
,

Meenakshi
Kalyan
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IELTS letter The street where you live is in poor condition. Write a letter to local City Council in your letter you Explain the situation Explain the likely consequence Describe the change you expect to occur

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  American English
8 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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