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The reasons why elderly people prefer to live in the countryside

The reasons why elderly people prefer to live in the countryside WGEka
Many young people prefer to move to big cities in modern life, but the older people prefer to stay in the countryside. Life in the countryside attracts the elderly for a variety of reasons. The three most important ones are a clean environment, low cost of living, hospitable people. Firstly, the countryside has a cleaner environment for older people. Living in the countryside, less air pollution, and more fabulous trees and grass help improve psychological health. Besides, spending more time in nature can improve the elderly's short-term memory and lower their blood pressure. Secondly, the cost of living in the countryside is lower than that in the cities. We are always sure that living in the country is cheaper than living in the city. In the country, we cannot earn much money; we don't have to waste money on unnecessary things. People in the country can produce their food or easily access organic food. Thirdly, the countryside is where you can have friendlier people and good-hearted neighbors. People in the country are kind and ready to help without asking for any favor. In short, the elderly want to live in the countryside because of valuable conditions such as a clean environment, low cost of living, and friendly people. That is the place; they can feel free and escape everyday life's stress.
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, less air pollution, and more fabulous trees and grass
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is lower than that in the cities. We are always sure that
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IELTS letter The reasons why elderly people prefer to live in the countryside

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