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Please tell us why you are motivated and suitable for this role, focusing on the skills, knowledge and experience you bring and how they can be applied or useful for the job of a Teaching Assistant.

Please tell us why you are motivated and suitable for this role, focusing on the skills, knowledge and experience you bring and how they can be applied or useful for the job of a Teaching Assistant. 3gLWb
Dear British Council, First and foremost, I would love to introduce some pieces of my general information. My name is Nguyen Thien Nhan. At the University of Science VNUHCM, I am a sophomore college student majoring in Information Technology - High-Quality program. To clarify my motivation for being a teaching assistant, I prefer to tell a short narrative about how I got my enthusiasm for the job. It is kindly an ordinary story but meaningful to me. Since my younger brother entered his secondary school many years ago, I have spent much time mentoring him in some school subjects such as English, Maths, and Science. I realized his extreme difficulties in the study because of not having deep comprehension. At that time, I discovered my ardor to assist not only my brother but also the other young children who are the seeds of the nation. Every time doing so, my patience, compassion, sympathy, and teaching ability all steadily improve. Ultimately, my passion becomes so immense, leading me to this application today. In terms of my academic records, I believe I have various accomplishments that exceed the requirements of the British Council to be a teaching assistant. Regarding my English proficiency, I have recently attained the IELTS test result with an overall score of 7. 0 from the Council, which is trusted to meet the fundamental English criterion. Furthermore, thanks to the college tutors who have assigned numerous coding projects and homework to their students to work in groups, it surprisingly leads not only my teamwork ability to a certain level but also my computer skills, including the indicated office applications, to be mastered outstandingly. Regarding my experience, I have never worked as a teaching assistant before; nevertheless, there are a few experiences I trust to be practical for the teaching assistant position beyond mentoring my younger brother. When I was younger, I used to study in many different English language centers and teachers. As a result, it enables me to comprehend a wide range of lessons and employ a variety of distinctive teaching styles including their self-study methods, to know some of which the children enjoy and do not. Additionally, whenever I have free time, I frequently attempt to teach my mates peer-to-peer for their upcoming exams, both paid and by no charge. These experiences may not be particularly unique; however, they are among the most valuable experiences I have ever had as a sophomore college student in the education field. To sum up, according to these abilities and achievements, I sincerely hope that I will get employed as a teaching assistant to work in a professional environment such as that of the British Council. By yielding me this position, it will become the beginning of my dream work to help the children improve their English proficiency as well as develop their soft skills and demanding knowledge. I believe and am confident that I will be a children-caring, trustworthy, and valuable applicant and employee of the Council. Sincerely, Nguyen Thien Nhan.
Dear British Council,

First
and foremost, I would
love
to introduce
some
pieces of my general information. My name is Nguyen
Thien
Nhan
. At the University of Science
VNUHCM
, I am a sophomore college student majoring in Information Technology
-
High-Quality program.

To clarify my motivation for being a
teaching
assistant
, I prefer to
tell
a short narrative about how I
got
my enthusiasm for the job. It is kindly an ordinary story
but
meaningful to me. Since my younger brother entered his secondary school
many
years ago, I have spent much
time
mentoring him in
some
school subjects such as English,
Maths
, and Science. I realized his extreme difficulties in the study
because
of not having deep comprehension. At that
time
, I discovered my ardor to assist not
only
my brother
but
also
the other young children who are the seeds of the nation. Every
time
doing
so
, my patience, compassion, sympathy, and
teaching
ability all
steadily
improve
.
Ultimately
, my passion becomes
so
immense, leading me to this application
today
.

In terms of my academic records, I believe I have various accomplishments that exceed the requirements of the British Council to be a
teaching
assistant
. Regarding my English proficiency, I have recently attained the IELTS
test
result with an
overall
score of 7. 0 from the Council, which
is trusted
to
meet
the fundamental English criterion.
Furthermore
, thanks to the college tutors who have assigned numerous coding projects and homework to their students to work in groups, it
surprisingly
leads not
only
my teamwork ability to a certain level
but
also
my computer
skills
, including the indicated office applications, to
be mastered
outstandingly
.

Regarding my
experience
, I have never worked as a
teaching
assistant
before
;
nevertheless
, there are a few
experiences
I trust to be practical for the
teaching
assistant
position beyond mentoring my younger brother. When I was younger, I
used
to study in
many
different
English language centers and teachers.
As a result
, it enables me to comprehend a wide range of lessons and employ a variety of distinctive
teaching
styles including their self-study methods, to know
some
of which the children enjoy and do not.
Additionally
, whenever I have free
time
, I
frequently
attempt to teach my mates peer-to-peer for their upcoming exams, both paid and by no charge. These
experiences
may not be
particularly
unique;
however
, they are among the most valuable
experiences
I have ever had as a sophomore college student in the education field.

To sum up, according to these abilities and achievements, I
sincerely
hope that I will
get
employed as a
teaching
assistant
to work in a professional environment such as that of the British Council. By yielding me this position, it will become the beginning of my dream work to
help
the children
improve
their English proficiency
as well
as develop their soft
skills
and demanding knowledge. I believe and am confident that I will be a children-caring, trustworthy, and valuable applicant and employee of the Council.

Sincerely
,

Nguyen
Thien
Nhan
.
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IELTS letter Please tell us why you are motivated and suitable for this role, focusing on the skills, knowledge and experience you bring and how they can be applied or useful for the job of a Teaching Assistant.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
501 words
6.0
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