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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 7BBk
Dear Sara, I hope this letter finds you in a radiant health, I am writing to you regarding our last meeting in your family’s house last week which was highly appreciated. I was really amazed by the way your mother was preparing different delicious meals at the same moment without any panic, also, the manner in which your father was presenting them on the table. Actually, I have never visited the countryside before, for this reason, I would like to thank you about this amazing experience. Moreover, the fact of presenting me to your family, I was really honored. In addition to all the beautiful nature, your mother’s cooking was mouth-watering, I couldn’t help but eat all different meals that were presented. I would like to invite you with your family to come to visit me in the next holidays to present you our local food and especially our traditions. I am looking forward to hear from you. Best wishes.
Dear Sara,

I hope this letter finds you in a radiant health, I am writing to you regarding our last meeting in your family’s
house
last week which was
highly
appreciated.

I was
really
amazed by the way your mother was preparing
different
delicious meals at the same moment without any panic,
also
, the manner in which your father was presenting them on the table.

Actually, I have never visited the countryside
before
,
for this reason
, I would like to thank you about this amazing experience.
Moreover
, the fact of presenting me to your family, I was
really
honored.
In addition
to all the
beautiful
nature, your mother’s cooking was mouth-watering, I couldn’t
help
but
eat all
different
meals that
were presented
.

I would like to invite you with your family to
come
to visit me in the
next
holidays to present you our local food and
especially
our traditions.

I am looking forward
to hear
from you.

Best wishes.
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IELTS letter The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend

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  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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