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Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? pV22
Dear Sir, I am writing to you to enquire about a replacement lithium battery and a charger for my Samsung 8 smartphone. The reason I am writing to you is that I have been having issues with charging my phone for several months and, finally, upon consulting a certified support center in Darlinghurst, I have been advised that your branch might have the required parts that will fix the issue. Could you please advise if you could order a charger and a lithium battery for Samsung 8 and the estimated costs involved for this purchase? Do you think it is possible to have them delivered to your shop within two weeks? If you have them readily available, I can pick the order next week. Since I will be traveling to your shop from Bowral, which means about a two-hour trip one way for me, it will be much appreciated if you could hold my order for a week, once you have received the parts, so that I can plan my journey. Please advise what is the time limit for how long you can store preordered items. Yours faithfully, Vachana Rose
Dear Sir,

I am writing to you to
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enquire
about a replacement lithium battery and a charger for my Samsung 8 smartphone.

The reason I am writing to you is that I have been having issues with charging my phone for several months and,
finally
, upon consulting a certified support center in
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Darlinghurst
, I have
been advised
that your branch might have the required parts that will
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fix
the issue.

Could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
advise if you could order a charger and a lithium battery for Samsung 8 and the estimated costs involved for this
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purchase
? Do you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it is possible to have them delivered to your shop within two weeks? If you have them
readily
available, I can pick the order
next
week.

Since I will be traveling to your shop from
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Bowral
, which means about a two-hour trip one way for me, it will be much appreciated if you could hold my order for a week, once you have received the parts,
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so
that I can plan my journey.
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Please
advise what is the time limit for how long you can store preordered items.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Vachana
Rose
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IELTS letter Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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