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You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should: Say what you enjoyed about the dinner Describe how you feel about his/her family Invite your friend and his/her family to you place

You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should: Say what you enjoyed about the dinner Describe how you feel about his/her family Invite your friend and his/her family to you place Jpo6

Dear Paul, First of all, i am thanking you for the wonderful dinner we had at your home last week! It was an awesome experience for me to interact with your family, because i won't visited my family for the past 6 months due to exams, seminars and final year projects. Dinner is awesome, usually dinner includes variety of food items but at your home it is full of energtic perfomance, mini games, a small get to teghter with the friends. As you know i am an Indian, I really enjoyed the food served at your home, especially the Pasta. I love to eat pasta and the taste of home made pasta is fully hygenic and rich in protein content compared to the one, we normally ate at restarants. Eventhough your mother is an Italian and don't understand my language, but he treated me so friendly and accepted me us one of your family members. That was the most emotional moment in my life. Your sisters presented me a raaki (a small rope tighted in hand) and accepted me as her brother. I am gladly invite you and your family to spend some valuable with me in my country on your upcoming holiday trips. As your family enjoys camping a lot my city is best suits for it. The mountain climbing, camping through the wood forest, cycling all gives the full refreshments and pleasure. Inform me about your arrival before, so that it make all arrangements for you. Looking back to hear from you soon. Regards|Sujitha

Dear Paul, This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
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family
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
Did you mean "I"?I
i
 won't The verb 'won't' requires base form of this verb: "visit"visit
visited
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 for the past 6 months due to exams, seminars and final year projects.

Dinner is awesome, usually
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but
 at your home it is full of Possible spelling mistake found.energetic
energtic
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perfomance
, mini games, a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to Possible spelling mistake found.tighterdefterleftertufter
teghter
 with the friends. As you know Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am an Indian, I really
 enjoyed the food served at your home, especially
 the Pasta. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to eat pasta and the taste of home made pasta is fully
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hygenic
 and rich in protein content compared to the one, we normally
 ate at Possible spelling mistake found.restaurants
restarants
. Possible spelling mistake found.Even though
Eventhough
 your mother is an Italian and don't understand my language, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he treated me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 friendly and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 me us one of your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 members. That was the most emotional moment in my life. Your sisters presented me a Possible spelling mistake found.rankranksRAAFrabbirackracks
raaki
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small
 rope Possible spelling mistake found.giftedliftedsightedlightedtightertighten
tighted
 in hand) and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 me as her brother.

I am gladly
Consider using a past participle here: "invited".invited
invite
 you and your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 to spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 valuable with me in my country on your upcoming holiday trips. As your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 enjoys camping a lot my city is best suits for it. The mountain climbing, camping through the wood forest, cycling all gives the full refreshments and pleasure. Inform me about your arrival This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 all arrangements for you.

Looking back to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

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Sujitha