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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. daq2
Dear Mr. Zack Brown I am writing this letter to inform you that I am planning to join an online course for Web Development and Network Building Training. The course is about to commence on 25th of February 2021 and it will be a 15-day training course which is provided free of cost by Mark Academy. As an I. T Service Desk employee, it will be a boost towards my career and will help the company to resolve the Website and Network related issues inside the company only rather than hiring a new employee. As our company is planning to open a new branch in New York, I would be able to manage the resources of our branch company from our current location. To finish off this course successfully, I want you to adjust my schedule and reduce my work hours from 10 to 8 and my working days from 5 to 4 respectively. I hope you will understand and looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Shubham
Dear Mr. Zack Brown

I am writing this letter to inform you that I am planning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
an online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
for Web Development and Network Building Training. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
is about to commence on 25th of February 2021 and it will be a 15-day training
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
which
is provided
free of cost by Mark Academy.

As an I. T Service Desk employee, it will be a boost towards my career and will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
to resolve the Website and Network related issues inside the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
rather
than hiring a new employee. As our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
is planning to open a new branch in New York, I would be able to manage the resources of our branch
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
from our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
location.

To finish off this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
successfully
, I want you to adjust my schedule and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
my work hours from 10 to 8 and my working days from 5 to 4
respectively
.

I hope you will understand and looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully


Shubham
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IELTS letter You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
169 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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