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The company you work for is planning to provide special training for staff. Your duty is to find out if the local conference centre has suitable facilities in order to hold the training

The company you work for is planning to provide special training for staff. Your duty is to find out if the local conference centre has suitable facilities in order to hold the training LQop
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to book your conference center for my companies upcoming training program. Let me give you some details of the program. This program will focus on the overall development of the employees in order to increase productivity of the company. Our management is planning to hold the program on 03 April 2021. It will be concluded within 4 hours. We have our equipment for giving the presentation. As it is only for the staff members our requirement for seating is less, but would require some extra furniture such as tables and seat so that the trainer would be able to express properly. Our equipment includes projector, screen and speaker. I would like to enquire about the facilities provided by the conference center. Will you manage seating arrangement? As we are planning to have a break in between is it possible that we can store our snacks in any storage unit? Waiting for your response. Your Faithfully, ABC.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to book your conference center for my
companies
upcoming training program.

Let
me give you
some
details
of the program. This program will focus on the
overall
development of the employees in order to increase productivity of the
company
. Our management is planning to hold the program on 03 April 2021. It will
be concluded
within 4 hours.

We have our equipment for giving the presentation. As it is
only
for the staff members our requirement for seating is less,
but
would require
some
extra furniture such as tables and seat
so
that the trainer would be able to express
properly
. Our equipment includes projector, screen and speaker.

I would like to
enquire
about the facilities provided by the conference center. Will you manage seating arrangement? As we are planning to have a break in between is it possible that we can store our snacks in any storage unit?

Waiting for your response.

Your
Faithfully
,

ABC.
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IELTS letter The company you work for is planning to provide special training for staff. Your duty is to find out if the local conference centre has suitable facilities in order to hold the training

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  American English
8 paragraphs
165 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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