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The news company is going to start new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program would be like. Include the following in your letter; How you know about that place What suggestions you would like to make Why you are offering these suggestions.

The news company is going to start new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program would be like. Include the following in your letter; How you know about that place What suggestions you would like to make Why you are offering these suggestions. kYYxO
Dear sir/ madam, I am Richard Cristal. I have come to know from one of my friends who had been a news editor in the AAC news for 3 years that your news channel is starting a new TV telecast on the St. Xavier’s University, the most trusted education system in our city. So, I am writing this letter to give some recommendations regarding it. I have completed my graduation from Xavier’s last year as I have spent 4years there; consequently I am better acquainted about this place. To make this show engrossing, interrogate pupils and staff members of university about current affairs and ask about the changes they would want to see in our city. I would also like to advise that to make library and science stream the part of this show. The student library is always filled with brainy adolescents who may help you to make your show more interesting by sharing their general knowledge. Moreover, in the science department, you would see students who are coming from the different corners of the town, they know the best about the obstacles they face while reaching the school. I hope these suggestions may help you to make program more gripping. Yours Faithfully, Richard Cristal
Dear sir/ madam,

I am Richard
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to know from one of my friends who had been a
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editor in the AAC
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for 3 years that your
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channel is starting a
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new
TV telecast on the St. Xavier’s University, the most trusted education system in our city.
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So
, I am writing this letter to give
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recommendations regarding it.

I have completed my graduation from Xavier’s last year as I have spent 4years there;
consequently
I am better acquainted about this place. To
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
engrossing, interrogate pupils and staff members of university about
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current
affairs and ask about the
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changes
they would want to
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see
in our city. I would
also
like to advise that to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
library and science stream the part of this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
. The student library is always filled with brainy adolescents who may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
more interesting by sharing their general knowledge.

Moreover
, in the science department, you would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
students who are coming from the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
corners of the town, they know the best about the obstacles they face while reaching the school.

I hope these suggestions may
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help
you to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
program more gripping.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Richard
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IELTS letter The news company is going to start new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program would be like. Include the following in your letter; How you know about that place What suggestions you would like to make Why you are offering these suggestions.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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