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The music young people like

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Dear Sam, Thanks for your letter asking for information. Sounds cool that you’re doing homework about the music young people like in different countries. As for me and my friends, we listen to different and genres of music, for instance, pop, rock and rap which are most popular among modern teenagers. Actually, lots of teens, myself included, listen to music while studying, doing their homework as it improves concentration, memory. To be honest, I can’t play music myself, but I want to learn how to play the guitar as it will give me seriously deeper understanding and appreciation of music. I hope that answers all of your questions. Please write to me if you need any more information. I’d really like to see your finished homework. Yours sincerely, Alina
Dear Sam,

Thanks for your letter asking for information. Sounds cool that you’re doing homework about the
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music
young
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people
like in
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different
countries.

As for me and my friends, we listen to
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different
and genres of
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music
,
for instance
, pop, rock and rap which are most popular among modern
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teenagers
. Actually, lots of teens, myself included, listen to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
while studying, doing their homework as it
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improves
concentration, memory. To be honest, I can’t play
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music
myself,
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but
I want to learn how to play the guitar as it will give me
seriously
deeper understanding and appreciation of music.

I hope that answers all of your questions.
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Please
write to me if you need any more information. I’d
really
like to
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see
your finished homework.

Yours
sincerely
,

Alina
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IELTS letter The music young people like

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
128 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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