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Informing a friend that you would not be able to join the movie plan and asking him to use the booked tickets

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Dear Henry How are you? I hope you are in the best of spirits and radiant health. I am writing this letter with great regret to inform you that I would not be able to join you for the movie plan that we made a few days back. First of all I would like to apologize for the last minute cancellation. I understand that with this news all your excitement would have crashed to the ground. I am deeply sad and remorseful for causing you this distress and inconvenience. The reason why I called off for the movie night is my health. I have been feeling unwell for the past few days. My body was aching immensely and I was also having a high temperature. Thus I decided to book an appointment to visit the doctor and have my check up. My reports came the following morning and I found out that I am COVID positive. Due to this I have been asked to quarantine for 14 days. I know you have bought the tickets and made plans for the same. Therefore, I want you to enjoy the movie and not waste the ticket. I suggest you take your mother or sister for the show and have a gala evening with them. There is also another option. You can sell the tickets online and get the spent money back. I again apologize to you for whatever trouble I caused and being a spoilsport. I promise you to make up for the situation that was caused once I am up and about. Say hi to anu and aunty from my side. Yours faithfully Vasundhra
Dear Henry

How are you? I hope you are in the best of spirits and radiant health. I am writing this letter with great regret to inform you that I would not be able to
join
you for the movie plan that we made a few days back.
First of all
I would like to apologize for the last minute cancellation. I understand that with this news all your excitement would have crashed to the ground. I am
deeply
sad and remorseful for causing you this distress and inconvenience.

The reason why I called off for the movie night is my health. I have been feeling unwell for the past few days. My body was aching
immensely and
I was
also
having a high temperature.
Thus
I decided to book an appointment to visit the doctor and have my
check
up. My reports came the following morning and I found out that I am
COVID
positive
. Due to this I have
been asked
to quarantine for 14 days.

I know you have
bought
the tickets and made plans for the same.
Therefore
, I want you to enjoy the movie and not waste the ticket. I suggest you take your mother or sister for the
show
and have a gala evening with them. There is
also
another option. You can sell the tickets online and
get
the spent money back. I again apologize to you for whatever trouble I caused and being a spoilsport. I promise you to
make
up for the situation that
was caused
once I am up and about. Say hi to
anu
and aunty from my side.

Yours
faithfully


Vasundhra
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IELTS letter Informing a friend that you would not be able to join the movie plan and asking him to use the booked tickets

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  American English
6 paragraphs
272 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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