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Present the conference findings to the team

Present the conference findings to the team 7WeP6
Dear sir, I am writing this to inform that I like to do presentation to my colleagues about gatherings that I found from recently attended conferenceI had chance to participate an event organized by the Google Design Team called The value of managing design systems. It is represented with most valuable members of their design team. While I was in the session I thought this might come in handy if we could apply this to our UX team as a strategy. So that the knowledge itself will be help us to mitigate major issues such a as creating redundant components, time management and documentation. I would be planing to this knowledge transferring in upcoming week. It will take only couple of hours from office hours. And I can assure you that this knowledge will be great asset to our team growth. I look forward to hearing from you and please respond me earliest possible. Your faithfully Chanaka.
Dear sir, I am writing this to inform that I like to do presentation to my colleagues about gatherings that I found from recently attended
conferenceI
had chance to participate an
event
organized by the Google Design
Team
called The value of managing design systems. It
is represented
with most valuable members of their design
team
. While I was in the session I
thought
this might
come
in handy if we could apply this to our UX
team
as a strategy.
So
that the knowledge itself will be
help
us to mitigate major issues such
a
as creating redundant components, time management and documentation. I would be planing to this knowledge transferring in upcoming week. It will take
only couple of
hours from office hours. And I can assure you that this knowledge will be great asset to our
team
growth. I look forward to hearing from you and
please
respond me
earliest
possible. Your
faithfully
Chanaka
.
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IELTS letter Present the conference findings to the team

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