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Letter to parents to invite to the USA

Letter to parents to invite to the USA m9ab8
Alisher Navoiy 95 Romitan district Bukhara region Dear Mom and Dad, I would like to invite both of you to the United States to stay with me for 3 month from June 3, 2021 to September 4, 2021. It would be very nice to have you with me. I do not want to listen to any refusals and expect you to come here. During you course of stay, we would visit various tourists places in the US such as New York, Washington DC, Niagara Falls, Las Vegas, Disney Land, and Florida. I want to spend quality time with you so that I can memories for my study abroad. During you stay in the US, I will bear all your responsibilities including, but not limited to, financial responsibilities, round trip air fare to and from Uzbekistan to USA, travel expenses within the US, housing and food. You will stay with me in my apartment in Topeka, Florida When you are in the US, you will also get an opportunity to see and experience the western culture, meet different kind of people and different variety of food. We would have a nice time together. It has been awhile since we saw each other. So, please begin planning for the trip. I am eagerly waiting for you to visit me. Your daughter, Xursand.
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Alisher
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Navoiy
95

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Romitan
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Bukhara region

Dear Mom and Dad,

I would like to invite both of you to the United States to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stay
with me for 3
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month
from June 3,
Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2021,".
2021
to September 4, 2021. It would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
nice to have you with me. I do not want to listen to any refusals and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
here. During you course of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stay
, we would visit various tourists places in the US such as New York, Washington DC, Niagara Falls, Las Vegas, Disney Land, and Florida.

I want to spend quality time with you
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so
that I
The word 'memories' is a noun or an adjective. A verb or adverb is missing or misspelled here, or maybe a comma is missing.
can memories
for my study abroad. During you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stay
in the US, I will bear all your responsibilities including,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not limited to, financial responsibilities, round trip air fare to and from Uzbekistan
A determiner is probably missing here: "to the USA".
to USA
, travel expenses within the US, housing and food. You will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stay
with me in my apartment in Topeka, Florida

When you are in the US, you will
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
an opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
and experience the western culture,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
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different
kind of
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people
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
variety of food. We would have a nice time together. It has been awhile since we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
each other.
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So
,
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please
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begin
planning for the trip. I am
eagerly
waiting for you to visit me.

Your daughter,

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Xursand
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IELTS letter Letter to parents to invite to the USA

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
220 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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