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Nowadays more people choose to work self employed

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Hindi contemporary world most of people prefer to be freelance instead of working as an employee for an organisation for a company this essay will highlight the facts that determines why this is happening and also its demerits as well next paragraph to begin with most of people chose to be freelance self employed due to the lack of job opportunities to explain it now a days most of job sectors companies demand experienced staff for their organisation and it is not possible for new workers to get Experience so they got difficulty to find jobs as a result they choose self freeagent work for earning money moreover some people born to be became rich in shorter time period for example a businessman a business can earn have tea amount of profit goes to the pocket of owner does it boost the financial status of person started became entrepreneur then working on a limited salary basis next paragraph however there are also some negative consequences of self centred of being self centred firstly a business contains always a risk of loss in other words the people don't get in other words the person don't get the surety of monthly salary because it all depends on business profit and loss for the more self employment make in balance between personal and professional life for instance a person works in a regular working days so he or she cannot give time to their personal life and family which result as imbalance in both lifestyles additionally self-centered employee will loss the employee benefits such as no sick pay for holiday pay and a person has a responsibility to pay their on text from their profit and it creates burden on financial status of a person in conclusion although there are a lot of advantages of self employed yet it is the significant for some individuals who did not get work due to the lack of experience and also benefited to grow rapidly than salary basis
Hindi contemporary world most of
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people
prefer to be freelance
instead
of working as an employee for an
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organisation
for a
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company
this essay will highlight the facts that determines why this is happening and
also
its demerits
as well
next
paragraph to
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begin
with most of
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people
chose to be freelance
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self employed
due to the lack of job opportunities to
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explain
it
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now a days
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most of job
sectors
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companies
demand experienced staff for their
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organisation
and it is not possible for new workers to
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get
Experience
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so
they
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got
difficulty to find jobs
as a result
they choose self
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freeagent
work for earning money
moreover
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some
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people
born to be
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became
rich in shorter time period
for example
a businessman a business can earn have tea amount of profit goes to the pocket of owner does it boost the financial status of
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person
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started
became entrepreneur then working on a limited salary basis
next
paragraph
however
there are
also
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some
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negative
consequences of
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self centred
of being
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self centred
firstly
a business
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contains always
a
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risk
of loss
in other words
the
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people
don't
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get
in other words
the
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person
don't
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get
the surety of monthly salary
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because
it all depends on business profit and loss for the more self employment
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make
in balance between personal and professional life
for instance
a
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person
works in a regular working days
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so
he or she cannot give time to their personal life and family which result as imbalance in both lifestyles
additionally
self-centered employee will
"loss" is a noun. Did you mean the verb "lose" (= 'to lose')?
loss
the employee benefits such as no sick pay for holiday pay and a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
has a responsibility to pay their on text from their profit and it creates burden on financial status of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
in conclusion
although there are
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a lot of
advantages of
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
self employed
yet
it is the significant for
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some
individuals who did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
work due to the lack of experience and
also
benefited to grow
rapidly
than salary basis
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IELTS letter Nowadays more people choose to work self employed

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  American English
1 paragraphs
331 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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