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I will working on the task assigned to me and I promise to accomplish them before the due date

I will working on the task assigned to me and I promise to accomplish them before the due date XlLDP
Dear Gabriel, I am writing to apologize to you for missing the team meeting on Friday. Let me explain my situation in more detail. I had a medical emergency in my family and I had to be there with them. My husband accidentally slipped from staircase and landed on his back injuring his spinal cord so we had to rush him to the hospital. He seems to be improving now and hopefully will be back to normal soon. I know how important the meeting was for our entire team and I would definitely try to make it up to it. Could you send me the minutes of meeting and action items which needs my attention? I will working on the task assigned to me and I promise to accomplish them before the due date. Once again, I would like to sincerely apologize for my absence. Yours Sincerely, Sofia
Dear Gabriel,

I am writing to apologize to you for missing the team meeting on Friday.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
my situation in more detail. I had a medical emergency in my family and I had to be there with them. My husband
accidentally
slipped from staircase and landed on his back injuring his spinal cord
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
we had to rush him to the hospital. He seems to be improving
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
and
hopefully
will be back to normal
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

I know how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
the meeting was for our entire team and I would definitely try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it up to it. Could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me the minutes of meeting and action items which needs my attention? I will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "work"
working
on the task assigned to me and I promise to accomplish them
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the due date.

Once again, I would like to
sincerely
apologize for my absence.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Sofia
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IELTS letter I will working on the task assigned to me and I promise to accomplish them before the due date

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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