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the letter about unforgetable meal

the letter about unforgetable meal JKRwj

Dear Joe, I'm writing this letter to talk about an unforgettable meal in my 19 years of life. I also know this Indian restaurant, where the place is very outstanding. I'm looking forward to coming to this restaurant next time. Last year, it was my mom's birthday party and I also memorized 20 marriages of my parents. My brother and I organized a party at the Ho Tay buffet. We have invited the whole family for this dinner, including my relationship, my mother’s number of friends. This party was very monumental with performances by the band and the musicians, who were rented by my brother. The main food is shrimp and several different kinds of seafood. I remembered that there were many sea foods on the table at the party. But I could not forget the taste’s Salt-roasted lobster. By myself, I'm a fussy eater but I am also persuaded by the taste's this cuisine. At this party, it seemed nobody cares about the surroundings. Then I binge-eat and eat tucked into my lobster. The Salt-roasted lobster was very delicious and aromatic. Especially, these foods make me understand that their quality justifies the bill. This food was created with three main ingredients: fresh lobster, salt, and another spice mix. Anyway, if you are curious about a dish I love, I will invite you to this restaurant and enjoy the Salt-roasted lobster next time. Yours sincerely, Quan-

Dear Joe,

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 know this Indian restaurant, where the place is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 outstanding. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm looking forward to coming to this restaurant next
 time.

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party
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 buffet. We have invited the whole family for this dinner, including my relationship, my mother’s number of friends. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
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very
 monumental with performances by the band and the musicians, who were rented
 by my brother.

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 and several This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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many
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foods
 on the table at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
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But
 I could not forget the taste’s Salt-roasted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclamcrustaceanmollusksnailscallopconch
lobster
. By myself, I'm a fussy eater This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I am also
 persuaded by the taste's this cuisine. At this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
, it seemed nobody cares about the surroundings. Then I binge-eat and eat tucked into my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclamcrustaceanmollusksnailscallopconch
lobster
. The Salt-roasted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclamcrustaceanmollusksnailscallopconch
lobster
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 delicious and aromatic. Especially
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
foods
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 me understand that their quality justifies the bill. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
was created
 with three main ingredients: fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclamcrustaceanmollusksnailscallopconch
lobster
, salt, and another spice mix.

Anyway, if you are curious about a dish I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
, I will invite you to this restaurant and enjoy the Salt-roasted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclamcrustaceanmollusksnailscallopconch
lobster
next
 time.

Yours sincerely
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