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Sample Online test about renting at George

Sample Online test about renting at George Xon8Y

Dear Miss Berry, as you know, I have rented 41 George Roche Road from you six months from 15th of August. However, I am afraid I will no longer be able to move in on that date, as my plans have had to change because of illness. During the summer vacation, I was working in a company as a Project Manager. Towards the end of my shift, I slipped and fell on a wet floor and broke my wrist. Luckily, it was clean break and didn't require surgery. However, it is my right wrist, and so I am unable to write for the time being. At present, I am at home in Kuala Lumpur until the plaster can be taken off. I think this should be in the last week of September. I will then return to my course in Canterbury and take up residence at 41 George Roche Road. I hope this will not cause you any difficulties.

Dear Miss Berry, as you know, I have rented 41 George Roche Road from you six months from 15th of August. However
, I am afraid I will no longer be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 in on that date, as my plans have had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of illness. During the summer vacation, I was working in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 as a Project Manager. Towards the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of my shift, I slipped and fell on a wet floor and broke my wrist. Luckily, it was clean break and didn't require surgery. However
, it is my right wrist, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I am unable to write for the time being. At present, I am at home in Kuala Lumpur until the plaster can be taken
 off. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 this should be in the last week of September. I will then return to my course in Canterbury and take up residence at 41 George Roche Road. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope this will not cause you any difficulties. 