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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts show information concerning speed-camera use, together with statistics on road accidents, for the city of Melbourne. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

Dear Sir, I am writing to regarding your attention related to speed-cameras which fixed in 2002 in the city of Melbourne to avoid any mishap. Actually, as per graph information we can easily see that in 2002 when the traffic cameras are started tha ratio was only up to 45 percent and the road accident was 1 percentage as far as the time passed means in 2005 the scanner limit reached to 150 level but however, here we can analyzed that the death rates from 2002 to 2005 were less rather than accidents. Thus, if we will work seriously on this project I am sure that for coming years we can benchmark on this situation because if 2002 the death percentage was 2. 5 than for forward step we control on demise and save the people precious life. Furthermore, related to my report and see the positive aspects of speed cameras are giving benefit to the society and able to control any mishappened. Kindly Regard, Yours Sincerely,
Dear Sir,

I am writing to regarding your attention related to speed-cameras which
fixed
in 2002 in the city of Melbourne to avoid any mishap.

Actually, as per graph information we can
easily
see
that in 2002 when the traffic cameras are
started


tha
ratio was
only
up to 45 percent and the road accident was 1 percentage as far as the time passed means in 2005 the scanner limit reached to 150 level
but
however
, here we can
analyzed
that the death rates from 2002 to 2005 were less
rather
than accidents.

Thus
, if we will work
seriously
on this project I am sure that for coming years we can benchmark on this situation
because
if 2002 the death percentage was 2. 5 than for forward step we control on demise and save the
people
precious life.

Furthermore
, related to my report and
see
the
positive
aspects of speed cameras are giving benefit to the society and able to control any
mishappened
.

Kindly Regard,

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter The charts show information concerning speed-camera use, together with statistics on road accidents, for the city of Melbourne.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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