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You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had and shy you think the restaurant is worth visiting.

Dear editor, My name is Susan Oliver. I am writing regarding a wonderful local restaurant, where I took my family to wine and dine last week. We had a special occasion to celebrate and a month ago we started a research where to organize an interesting dinner. Our choice was for the Borrema, a recently opened local restaurant specialized on French cuisine. First, we found a warm reception on arriving the place, as we did not have to wait even a blink having booked in advance. Second, the place was a quiet one. In other words as gentle, relaxing instrumental music was heard in a way that the visitors could talk and hear each other easily. Third, turning to the meal served, my mouth is still watering when I remember the wonderful stake we ordered. It was marinated in wine. The main meal was perfectly accompanied with fried rice. We were offered a complimentary dessert, a fluffy fruit cake. Finally, not only the food and atmosphere were attractive, but also the price was reasonable. In conclusion, I will recommend publishing a review of this restaurant in the “Enjoy your Food” section of your daily, so that food lovers also discover this place, as I would mention the meal was worth every penny. Yours faithfully, Susan Oliver
Dear editor,

My name is Susan Oliver. I am writing regarding a wonderful local restaurant, where I took my family to wine and dine last week.

We had a special occasion to celebrate and a month ago we
started
a research where to organize an interesting dinner. Our choice was for the
Borrema
, a recently opened local restaurant specialized on French cuisine.
First
, we found a warm reception on arriving the place, as we did not
have to
wait even a blink having booked in advance. Second, the place was a quiet one.
In other words
as gentle, relaxing instrumental music
was heard
in a way that the visitors could talk and hear each other
easily
. Third, turning to the meal served, my mouth is
still
watering when I remember the wonderful stake we ordered. It
was marinated
in wine. The main meal was
perfectly
accompanied with
fried rice. We
were offered
a complimentary dessert, a fluffy fruit cake.
Finally
, not
only
the food and atmosphere were attractive,
but
also
the price was reasonable.

In conclusion
, I will recommend publishing a review of this restaurant in the “Enjoy your Food” section of your daily,
so
that food lovers
also
discover this place, as I would mention the meal was worth every penny.

Yours
faithfully
,

Susan Oliver
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IELTS letter You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had and shy you think the restaurant is worth visiting.

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6.0
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