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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to obtain some information about Enivornmental seminar which were going to be held next month in Australia. Actually, I am interested in this conference because it's related to my subject in I am running my master degree and when I read this in newspaper it take me over the moon that it's the really fruitful for me to complete my project. Coming to the next point where you mention one line connected to the accomodation. Firstly, I would like to know wheather it's two bed room or you are going to provide studio suite. I am consicious to know for the price of that luxury apartment and it's possible for me to stay there in that range rather than to arrange something outside. Really it's highly appreciated that you are showing mills effort to run this round table meeting where the youngsters have the opportunity to learn some unique techinques. Waiting tor your favourable response. Yours Sincerely,
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to obtain
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some
information about
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Enivornmental
seminar which were going to
be held
next
month in Australia.

Actually, I
am interested
in this conference
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because
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it's
related to my subject in I am running my master degree and when I read this in newspaper it
After ‘it’, use the third-person verb form “takes”.
take
me over the moon that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
it's
the
really
fruitful for me to complete my project.

Coming to the
next
point where you mention one line connected to the
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accomodation
.
Firstly
, I would like to know
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wheather
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
it's
two
The noun “bedroom” is spelled as one word.
bed room
or you are going to provide studio suite. I am
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consicious
to know for the price of that luxury
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
apartment and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
it's
possible for me to stay there in that range
rather
than to arrange something outside.

Really
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
it's
highly
appreciated that you are showing mills effort to run this round table meeting where the youngsters have the opportunity to learn
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
unique
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techinques
.

Waiting
Did you mean “for”?
tor
your
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favourable
response.

Yours
Sincerely
,

IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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