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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate. As you know we share a room. I cannot focus on my study while he is in the room. Let me explain furthermore actually my roommate wakes up late in the morning and plays loud music at midnight. I can't able to finish my sleep because of the disturbance of loud music. I have early morning classes and I cannot concentrate on my study. I need a quiet room and he is taking my stuff without asking me. He is not tidy and keeps things messy. I request you can give me a new roommate next semester. I have told my roommate to do parties in other places but he still doing it in the room and invites his friend at late-night parties. I cannot stay with him longer. I will be grateful if you could change me a single room. Yours faithfully, Jateenkumar Patel

Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatefriend
roommate
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you know we share a room. I cannot focus on my study while he is in the room.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
furthermore
 actually my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatefriend
roommate
 wakes up late in the morning and plays loud music at midnight. I can't able to finish my sleep This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the disturbance of loud music. I have early morning classes and I cannot concentrate on my study. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 need a quiet Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).room, and
room and
 he is taking my stuff without asking me. He is not tidy and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 things messy.

I request you can give me a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatefriend
roommate
next
 semester. I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatefriend
roommate
 to do parties in other places This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he still
The pronoun ‘he’ is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: “does”, “did”.doesdid
doing
 it in the room and invites his friend at late-night parties. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 cannot stay with him longer.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 will be grateful if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 me a single room.

Yours faithfully
,

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Jateenkumar
 Patel