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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. WRITE A LETTER TO THE COLLEGE ENROLMENT OFFICER In your letter: ·explain why you are writing ·describe your circumstances ·ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir, My name is James Smith and I am currently working as a full time manager in a motor vehicle company in the north-west region of the city. I am writing this letter with regards to computer course your institute is offering this spring. I am really interested in the course, but I have not completed the prerequisite for this new middle level course. I did my under graduation in mechanics. After graduation, I started working as a mechanic in a North Car Company. Due to my dedication and continuous learning attitude, I am manager of the two stores of company in the area. Even though I did not obtain any official course credit in elementary computing, but due to my keen interest in computers, I made myself capable of operating a computer. As computer Knowledge is very crucial part of any business requirement. I did educate myself in different areas, such as Microsoft Word, Excel, and Outlook for emails. Being a manager, I have to use computers to perform various functions at work for sending emails to clients, making monthly employee work reports, creating time sheets templates, etc. When I read the elementary level course curriculum, I realized that I already have the skills and knowledge that is going to be teach in the course. Also, I am ready to give a mock exam, if you want to check my basic level knowledge of computers. So, I will really appreciate if you can waive the elementary course requirement for me and grant me permission to enrol in the new course in January 2019. I am looking forward for a positive reply. Thank you! James Smith
Dear Sir,

My name is James
Smith and
I am
currently
working as a full time manager in a motor vehicle
company
in the north-west region of the city. I am writing this letter
with regards to
computer
course
your institute is offering this spring. I am
really
interested in the
course
,
but
I have not completed the prerequisite for this new middle level course.

I
did my under graduation in mechanics. After graduation, I
started
working as a mechanic in a North Car
Company
. Due to my dedication and continuous learning attitude, I am manager of the two stores of
company
in the area.
Even though
I did not obtain any official
course
credit in elementary computing,
but
due to my keen interest in computers, I made myself capable of operating a computer.
As
computer Knowledge is
very
crucial part of any business requirement. I did educate myself in
different
areas, such as Microsoft Word, Excel, and Outlook for emails. Being a manager, I
have to
use
computers to perform various functions at work for sending emails to clients, making monthly employee work reports, creating time sheets templates, etc.

When I read the elementary level
course
curriculum, I realized that I already have the
skills
and knowledge
that is
going to be
teach
in the
course
.
Also
, I am ready to give a mock exam, if you want to
check
my basic level knowledge of computers.
So
, I will
really
appreciate if you can waive the elementary
course
requirement for me and grant me permission to enrol in the new
course
in January 2019.

I am looking forward for a
positive
reply.

Thank you!

James Smith
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IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. WRITE A LETTER TO THE COLLEGE ENROLMENT OFFICER In your letter: ·explain why you are writing ·describe your circumstances ·ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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7 paragraphs
276 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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