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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

I was stunned, when I heard the news about your accident and fracture in the leg during your journey from cricket field to your home. initially, I was very upset but captain said ' he is in the hospital and doctor said that the injury is minor and he will recover in a month' then I was bit relaxed. I am sure you also missed the final cricket mathch which was played on the last Sunday. Here, everyone had discussed about you before match. There was tie in the match; therefore, super over was played to decide the ultimate finalist. we were not able to perform best is one of the best basement was not with us, hence we lost the match. however, everyone enjoyed the play, althow the weather condition are to worst. there was more than 48 degree Celsius temperature, as a result everyone was drained. Every time, start our batting as an opener there was confusion who might be the best replacement at your place? in spite of we lost the game, we won the man of the match and man of the series title. Titles that was inspiring movements for all of team members. We hope for the fast recovery and I will also visit hospital on next Sunday. Yours sincerely, Mehul kandaria.

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, when I heard the news about your accident and fracture in the leg during your journey from cricket field to your home. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Initially
initially
, I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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upset
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but
 captain said Don’t put a space on both sides of a quote symbol.apply
' 
he is in the hospital and doctor said that the injury is Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).minor, and
minor and
 he will recover in a month' then I was It seems that an article is missing.a bit
bit
 relaxed.

I am sure you also
 missed the final cricket Possible spelling mistake found.matchmath ch
mathch
 which was played
 on the last Sunday. Here, everyone had Did you mean simply “discussed you”? You do not need the word “about” here.discussed you
discussed about you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
. There was tie in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
; therefore
, super over was played
 to decide the ultimate finalist. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.We
we
 were not able to perform best is one of the best basement was not with us, hence
 we lost the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.However
however
, everyone enjoyed the play, Possible spelling mistake found.alt how
althow
 the weather condition are to worst. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.There
there
 was more than 48 degree Celsius temperature, as a result
 everyone was drained
.

Every time, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 our batting as an opener there was confusion who might be the best replacement at your place? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.In
in
 spite of we lost the game, we won the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 of the series title. Titles that was inspiring movements for all of team members.

We hope for the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 recovery and I will also
 visit hospital on next
 Sunday.

Yours sincerely
,

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