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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Dear Sir/Ma'am, Good day! I would like to inform your good office about my interest for the computer course posted on the web. I have a huge interest with computers since I was a kid. It is always a dream for me to acquire my own computer at home. I do not have any background yet about computing and did not took an elementary course still, however, this does not hinder my pursuance to broaden my knowledge and enhance my skills with this kind of technology. An instance happened last week were my sister opt to finish her daily task at school which made me upset since I cannot provide any support to her. I personally believe that acquiring essential backgrounds with computer will develop my technical skills and familiarity its hardware and software. I hope that there are some exceptions for an individual like who has an eagerness to learn your course despite your rules for admission. Sending my best regards and appreciations for your consideration. Sincerely, Jennylyn Mercado
Dear Sir/Ma'am,

Good
day!

I would like to inform your
good
office about my interest for the computer course posted on the web. I have a huge interest with computers since I was a kid. It is always a dream for me to acquire my
own
computer at home. I do not have any background
yet
about computing and did not
took
an elementary course
still
,
however
, this does not hinder my pursuance to broaden my knowledge and enhance my
skills
with this kind of technology.

An instance happened last week were my sister opt to finish her daily task at school which made me upset since I cannot provide any support to her. I
personally
believe that acquiring essential backgrounds with computer will develop my technical
skills
and familiarity its hardware and software.

I hope that there are
some
exceptions for an individual like who has an eagerness to learn your course despite your
rules
for admission. Sending my best regards and appreciations for your consideration.

Sincerely
,

Jennylyn
Mercado
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IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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