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Write a letter to your friend to say that you will visit him/her in the future

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Dear old friend, Khang It has been a while since the last time we met, I hope you and your family are well. While the Covid 19 is being gradually eradicated, the travel restriction is still a considered problem. But I highly believe that if I have been vaccinated, I may have permission to travel abroad, which means that I will have a chance to visit you and enjoy New Zealand at the end of this year. I have heard about the freezing weather in your country especially in the winter, so do I need to bring any significant stuff? If there are some necessary things, please let me know. As far as I am considered it will be great if you are my tour guide. I cannot wait to be shown and visit all of the magnificent scenery, and some popular tourist attractions to broaden my horizon as much as try the scrumptious local cuisine. Eventually, I hope that you and I can have an absolute blast like the old times. Until there, I wish you and your parents will be healthier than ever. Looking forward to hearing from you. From your old pal Khoa
Dear
old
friend,
Khang


It has been a while since the last time we met, I hope you and your family are well. While the
Covid 19
is being
gradually
eradicated, the travel restriction is
still
a considered problem.
But
I
highly
believe that if I have
been vaccinated
, I may have permission to travel abroad, which means that I will have a chance to visit you and enjoy New Zealand at the
end
of this year.

I have heard about the freezing weather in your country
especially
in the winter,
so
do I need to bring any significant stuff? If there are
some
necessary things,
please
let
me know.

As far as I
am considered
it will be great if you are my tour guide. I cannot wait to
be shown
and visit
all of the
magnificent scenery, and
some
popular tourist attractions to broaden my horizon as much as try the scrumptious local cuisine.
Eventually
, I hope that you and I can have an absolute blast like the
old
times.

Until there, I wish you and your parents will be healthier than ever. Looking forward to hearing from you.

From your
old
pal

Khoa
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend to say that you will visit him/her in the future

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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