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You are going to visit the town where your friend study

You are going to visit the town where your friend study BwDXw
Dear JohnI'm writing to enquire about visiting town where you study. I've been looking for a job since three monthe that I have been graduated the course. Last day I read the article about a job which is suggested by a man who need a person to take care of his baby. I haven't made a desicion about it, but I'm going to try it. That's why I have a problem on staying soewhere. I know, you have been living there for a long time. In my opinion, you are the only person who can help me. The place I want to stay must be comfortable and luxuray. If it in the center and in the top of the some building, will be so good. If you could recommend some evening entertainment, I woul be very happy. I prefer to stay a week, so If you don't mind, tell me it's cost and other facilities. I look forward to hear you soon. yours sencerlyMuniwa
Dear
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JohnI
'm writing to
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enquire
about visiting town where you study. I've been looking for a job since three
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monthe
that I have
been graduated
the course. Last day I read the article about a job which
is suggested
by a
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man
who need a person to take care of his baby. I haven't made a
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desicion
about it,
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but
I'm going to try it. That's why I have a problem on staying
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soewhere
. I know, you have been living there for a long time. In my opinion, you are the
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only
person who can
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help
me. The place I want to stay
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must
be comfortable and
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luxuray
. If it in the center and in the top of the
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some
building, will be
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so
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good
. If you could recommend
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some
evening entertainment, I
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woul
be
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very
happy. I prefer to stay a week,
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so
If you don't mind,
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tell
me it's cost and other facilities. I look forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
you
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soon
.
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yours
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sencerlyMuniwa

IELTS letter You are going to visit the town where your friend study

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
163 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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