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You are going to visit the town where your friend study

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Dear JohnI'm writing to enquire about visiting town where you study. I've been looking for a job since three monthe that I have been graduated the course. Last day I read the article about a job which is suggested by a man who need a person to take care of his baby. I haven't made a desicion about it, but I'm going to try it. That's why I have a problem on staying soewhere. I know, you have been living there for a long time. In my opinion, you are the only person who can help me. The place I want to stay must be comfortable and luxuray. If it in the center and in the top of the some building, will be so good. If you could recommend some evening entertainment, I woul be very happy. I prefer to stay a week, so If you don't mind, tell me it's cost and other facilities. I look forward to hear you soon. yours sencerlyMuniwa
Dear
JohnI
'm writing to
enquire
about visiting town where you study. I've been looking for a job since three
monthe
that I have
been graduated
the course. Last day I read the article about a job which
is suggested
by a
man
who need a person to take care of his baby. I haven't made a
desicion
about it,
but
I'm going to try it. That's why I have a problem on staying
soewhere
. I know, you have been living there for a long time. In my opinion, you are the
only
person who can
help
me. The place I want to stay
must
be comfortable and
luxuray
. If it in the center and in the top of the
some
building, will be
so
good
. If you could recommend
some
evening entertainment, I
woul
be
very
happy. I prefer to stay a week,
so
If you don't mind,
tell
me it's cost and other facilities. I look forward
to hear
you
soon
.
yours
sencerlyMuniwa
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IELTS letter You are going to visit the town where your friend study

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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