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You are due to give a presentation at work at the end of this week, but you are unwell and would like to postpone the presentation.

You are due to give a presentation at work at the end of this week, but you are unwell and would like to postpone the presentation. VwNjw
Dear Mr. Rahul Goswami, I would like to ask you to delay my presentation which was organised this week by the committe members. The speech was on anatomy of tooth structure which was planned for the first year dental students on this saturday, in which they were suppose to learn the basic structure of tooth and how it is formed along with some demonstration. It was an important class for my students, and I feel extremely sad that I cannot carry forward the lecture for them due to sudden detoriation of my health, because of which I am still unable to gather all the notes that needs to be systemize for that day and deliver on the given timeline. Would it be possible to arrange it on next week? So that I can get enough time to prepare all the neccessory information required to display on that topic. Please accept my appologies for the same. Kind Regards, Dr. Bipasha Dutta
Dear Mr. Rahul
Goswami
,

I would like to ask you to delay my presentation which was
organised
this week by the
committe
members.

The speech was on anatomy of tooth structure which
was planned
for the
first
year dental students on this
saturday
, in which they were
suppose
to learn the basic structure of tooth and how it
is formed
along with
some
demonstration.

It was an
important
class
for my students, and I feel
extremely
sad that I cannot carry forward the lecture for them due to sudden
detoriation
of my health,
because
of which I am
still
unable to gather all the notes that needs to be
systemize
for that day and deliver on the
given
timeline.

Would it be possible to arrange it

on
next
week?

So that
I can
get
enough
time to prepare all the
neccessory
information required to display on that topic.

Please
accept my
appologies
for the same.

Kind Regards,

Dr.
Bipasha
Dutta
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IELTS letter You are due to give a presentation at work at the end of this week, but you are unwell and would like to postpone the presentation.

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