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Write a letter to your friend who is visiting your country with family and give him/her advice. You should Invite your friend to stay with you, Activities they could do, Give him some advice.

Write a letter to your friend who is visiting your country with family and give him/her advice. You should Invite your friend to stay with you, Activities they could do, Give him some advice. gWK6l
Hello Rachel, It was great to hear from you after ages. I cannot contain my excitement after reading your letter. You start packing your bags and leave the rest on me. You have upset me by asking about affordable lodgings. Don’t you remember I told you about moving into a 3-bedroom apartment? You and your family can stay with me for the entire visit. It would be my pleasure to host you guys and spend some quality time with your family. In addition, there are many shopping malls just around the corner from where I live. I know your sister loves museums and there are two museums just 10 minutes commute away. There is no entry fee so she can visit them as many times as she wants. Most importantly, there is a Music Festival happening the same time you will be visiting. We can all go and enjoy some local bands playing. How many tickets should I buy? The weather has unexpectedly turned chilly. So, please do pack up warmly and also bring your raincoat and your boots as it tends to rain a lot in November. I am eagerly waiting for your reply. With lots of love, Jane.
Hello Rachel,

It was great to hear from you after ages. I cannot contain my excitement after reading your letter. You
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packing your bags and
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leave
the rest on me.

You have upset me by asking about affordable lodgings. Don’t you remember I
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told
you about moving into a 3-bedroom apartment? You and your family can stay with me for the entire visit. It would be my pleasure to host you guys and spend
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some
quality time with your family.

In addition
, there are
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many
shopping malls
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just
around the corner from where I
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live
. I know your sister
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loves
museums and there are two museums
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just
10 minutes commute away. There is no entry fee
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so
she can visit them as
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many
times as she wants. Most
importantly
, there is a Music Festival happening the same time you will be visiting. We can all go and enjoy
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some
local bands playing. How
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many
tickets should I
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buy
?

The weather has
unexpectedly
turned chilly.
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So
,
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please
do pack up
warmly
and
also
bring your raincoat and your boots as it tends to rain a lot in November.

I am
eagerly
waiting for your reply.

With lots of
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love
,

Jane.

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend who is visiting your country with family and give him/her advice. You should Invite your friend to stay with you, Activities they could do, Give him some advice.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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