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The air-conditioner in your flat broke three weeks aago anf it is the middle of summer. You asked the landlord to repair it and he promised to send someone but no-one has contacted you yet. Write a letter to the landlord complaining about the situation. In your letter: explain the problem, remind the landlord about his promise, say what you want him to do.

The air-conditioner in your flat broke three weeks aago anf it is the middle of summer. You asked the landlord to repair it and he promised to send someone but no-one has contacted you yet. Write a letter to the landlord complaining about the situation. In your letter: explain the problem, remind the landlord about his promise, say what you want him to do. Jo3dB
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain about the air-conditioner which has been broken in your apartment for three weeks. I has rented your flat at 140A Dien Bien Phu Street. As I remember, on Sunday three weeks ago, I certainly contacted you by messenger and you promised to take someone repair it. The second time I called you when you weren’t home but you also make sure but since then no-one repaired it. So, I hope you will recall because of the hot temperature in the middle of summer. This is the reason why I can’t focus on something I do, and I feel unpleasant now. Please keep your engagement and contact me soon. I look forward to hearing from you. Your faithfully, Yen.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about the air-conditioner which has
been broken
in your apartment for three weeks.

I
Possible agreement error -- use base form here: "have", "haven".
has
rented your flat at 140A
Possible spelling mistake found.
Dien
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Bien
Possible spelling mistake found.
Phu
Street. As I remember, on Sunday three weeks ago, I
certainly
contacted you by messenger and you promised to take someone
The pronoun 'someone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "repairs", "repaired".
repair
it. The second time I called you when you weren’t home
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
you
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
since then no-one repaired it.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I hope you will recall
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the hot temperature in the middle of summer. This is the reason why I can’t focus on something I do, and I feel unpleasant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
your engagement and contact me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

Yen.

IELTS letter The air-conditioner in your flat broke three weeks aago anf it is the middle of summer. You asked the landlord to repair it and he promised to send someone but no-one has contacted you yet. Write a letter to the landlord complaining about the situation. In your letter: explain the problem, remind the landlord about his promise, say what you want him to do.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
127 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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