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Writing a letter to a friend for accomodation in abroad.

Writing a letter to a friend for accomodation in abroad. 9LBoj
Dear Omuk, Hope everything is fine at your end. For some reason I would like to contact with you through this latter regarding the accommodation in Toronto. Recently I admitted in the Toronto University, probably next month 20th I will fly in Toronto. For that reason I am little bit confused where I should stay. Suddenly came in mind that you are there. On behalf of me, can you do me a favor to find a house or apartment for me? Actually I am really helpless right now regarding this issue. Even I do not know the rent about the apartment. Can you please help me on this? It will very helpful if you find the apartment near in the Toronto University. Let me know if possible for you or not. Oh sorry I did not take any news first. How are you and how was your study. Actually I am very tens regarding this issue. Will meet soon and will have a very good gossiping time soon. Take care my friend. Tokuk.
Dear
Omuk
,

Hope everything is fine at your
end
. For
some
reason I would like to contact with you through this latter regarding the accommodation in Toronto. Recently I admitted in the Toronto University,
probably
next
month 20th I will
fly
in Toronto. For that reason I am
little bit
confused where I should stay.
Suddenly
came in mind that you are there.

On behalf of me, can you do me a favor to find a
house
or apartment for me? Actually I am
really
helpless right
now
regarding this issue. Even I do not know the rent about the apartment. Can you
please
help
me on this? It will
very
helpful if you find the apartment near in the Toronto University.
Let
me know if possible for you or not.

Oh
sorry I did not take any news
first
. How are you and how was your study. Actually I am
very
tens regarding this issue. Will
meet
soon
and will have a
very
good
gossiping time
soon
.

Take care my friend.

Tokuk
.
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IELTS letter Writing a letter to a friend for accomodation in abroad.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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