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Thanks letter to restaurant's director

Thanks letter to restaurant's director 8G82G
I am writing this letter to thank you for your restaurant service. I am consumer and every year we celebrate our party in your restaurant. Two days ago we went to your restaurant. Because my son's was a birthday. I had booked a room. So went there at 6 o'clock in the evening on that day. All things were ready for us. Furthermore your meal and cakes were very much delicious. Also your waitress so politible for everybody. Their attitude were very likeable. We liked them all of us. My son was very happy on that day. My husband and I was very much greatful to your service. Please accept heartfelt thankfulness to you. We felt very much glad of your restaurant. I hope you will accept my thankfullness. Your faithfully,
I am writing this letter to thank you for your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
service. I am consumer and every year we celebrate our party in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
. Two days ago we went to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
my
Consider using the plural form here: "sons".
son's
was a birthday. I had booked a room.
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So
went there at 6 o'clock in the evening on that day. All things were ready for us.
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Furthermore
your meal and cakes were
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very
much delicious.
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Also
your waitress
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so
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politible
for everybody. Their attitude were
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very
likeable. We liked them all of us. My son was
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very
happy on that day. My
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husband and
I was
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very
much
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greatful
to your service.
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Please
accept heartfelt thankfulness to you. We felt
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very
much glad of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
. I hope you will accept my
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thankfullness
.
Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

IELTS letter Thanks letter to restaurant's director

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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