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Thanks letter to restaurant's director

Thanks letter to restaurant's director 8G82G

I am writing this letter to thank you for your restaurant service. I am consumer and every year we celebrate our party in your restaurant. Two days ago we went to your restaurant. Because my son's was a birthday. I had booked a room. So went there at 6 o'clock in the evening on that day. All things were ready for us. Furthermore your meal and cakes were very much delicious. Also your waitress so politible for everybody. Their attitude were very likeable. We liked them all of us. My son was very happy on that day. My husband and I was very much greatful to your service. Please accept heartfelt thankfulness to you. We felt very much glad of your restaurant. I hope you will accept my thankfullness. Your faithfully,

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 service. I am consumer and every year we celebrate our party in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoffee shopbardinerjointinnoutlet
restaurant
. Two days ago we went to your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoffee shopbardinerjointinnoutlet
restaurant
. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 my Consider using the plural form here: "sons".sons
son's
 was a birthday. I had booked a room. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 went there at 6 o'clock in the evening on that day. All things were ready for us. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Furthermore,
Furthermore
 your meal and cakes were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much delicious. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 your waitress This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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politible
 for everybody. Their attitude were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 likeable. We liked them all of us. My son was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy on that day. My Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).husband, and
husband and
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very
 much Possible spelling mistake found.gratefuldreadfulrestfulfretful
greatful
 to your service. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 accept heartfelt thankfulness to you. We felt This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much glad of your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoffee shopbardinerjointinnoutlet
restaurant
. I hope you will accept my Possible spelling mistake found.thankfulnessthank fullness
thankfullness
. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
, 