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letter about town centres

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Mahmoud Shaker, and I am an old resident in Alexandria. I am writing this letter in response to the last week article talking about the similarities in the town centres in my town. The first point I want to raise is that although I do not totally in agreement with the opinion mentioned, I believe that the author has a valid point when it comes to the overall size of the centres which mostly consists of a single floor only. Another thing I want to discuss is that my town centres have unique features that stand them out from other centres such as the presence of an outdoor cafes and restaurants that are designed in a spectacular architectural features which represents the historical eras of my town in which it was famous for. One final issue I forgot to mention is that I would be honored to accompany the writer in a tour where I will be trying my best to show the beauty of my town that lies within its mesmerizing natural sceneries along with the modern facilities and infrastructures. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your convenience. Best Regards, Mahmoud Shaker
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Mahmoud Shaker, and I am an
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old
resident in Alexandria. I am writing this letter in response to the last week article talking about the similarities in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.
centres
in my town.

The
first
point I want to raise is that although I do not
totally
in agreement with the opinion mentioned, I believe that the author has a valid point when it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to the
overall
size of the
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.
centres
which
mostly
consists of a single floor
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only
.

Another thing I want to discuss is that my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.
centres
have unique features that stand them out from other
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.
centres
such as the presence of an outdoor
'cafes' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cafés"
cafes
and restaurants that
are designed
in a spectacular architectural features which represents the historical eras of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
in which it was
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famous
for.

One final issue I forgot to mention is that I would
be honored
to accompany the writer in a tour where I will be trying my best to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
the beauty of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
that lies within its mesmerizing natural sceneries along with the modern facilities and infrastructures.

I am looking forward to hearing from you at your convenience.

Best Regards,

Mahmoud Shaker
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IELTS letter letter about town centres

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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