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You have resently come back from holiday and the hotel which you stayed at didn' saticify you. Write letter to the hotel manager.

You have resently come back from holiday and the hotel which you stayed at didn' saticify you. Write letter to the hotel manager. jDwJX
Dear Sir, I am writing to complaint about your hotel where I spent my holyday. First of all, in your brochure you mentioned that all the rooms had fridges. The problem was that the fridge in my suit didn't work properly during my staying. Moreover, the brochure claimed that there was a TV with satellete TV channels, but only two local channels available and unfortunately they were not in English. In addition, there was mentioned in brochure that the hotel located some metres from the beach, due to the fithy condition of the beach swimming became a dream for me. Last but not least, that in the brochure said that the hotel was only some minutes from the town centre, but you didn't mention it was some minutes away by car. I think it is clear that your brochure was misleading. As a result, it would be better if you organise a partial refund because this was the worst holiday that I had ever had. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply. Yours faithfully.
Dear Sir,

I am writing to complaint about your hotel where I spent my
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holyday
.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, in your
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brochure
you mentioned that all the rooms had fridges. The problem was that the fridge in my suit didn't work
properly
during my staying.
Moreover
, the
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brochure
claimed that there was a TV with
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satellete
TV channels,
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but
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only
two local channels available and unfortunately they were not in English.

In addition
, there
was mentioned
in
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brochure
that the hotel located
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some
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metres
from the beach, due to the
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fithy
condition of the beach swimming became a dream for me. Last
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but
not least, that in the
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brochure
said that the hotel was
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only
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some
minutes from the town
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centre
,
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but
you didn't mention it was
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some
minutes away by car.

I
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think
it is
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clear
that your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
brochure
was misleading.
As a result
, it would be better if you
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organise
a partial refund
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because
this was the worst holiday that I had ever had.

I look forward to receiving a prompt reply.

Yours
faithfully
.

IELTS letter You have resently come back from holiday and the hotel which you stayed at didn' saticify you. Write letter to the hotel manager.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
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