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You have resently come back from holiday and the hotel which you stayed at didn' saticify you. Write letter to the hotel manager.

You have resently come back from holiday and the hotel which you stayed at didn' saticify you. Write letter to the hotel manager. jDwJX

Dear Sir, I am writing to complaint about your hotel where I spent my holyday. First of all, in your brochure you mentioned that all the rooms had fridges. The problem was that the fridge in my suit didn't work properly during my staying. Moreover, the brochure claimed that there was a TV with satellete TV channels, but only two local channels available and unfortunately they were not in English. In addition, there was mentioned in brochure that the hotel located some metres from the beach, due to the fithy condition of the beach swimming became a dream for me. Last but not least, that in the brochure said that the hotel was only some minutes from the town centre, but you didn't mention it was some minutes away by car. I think it is clear that your brochure was misleading. As a result, it would be better if you organise a partial refund because this was the worst holiday that I had ever had. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply. Yours faithfully.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to complaint about your hotel where I spent my Possible spelling mistake found.holidayHolidayholy day
holyday
.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhandbillbooklethandoutleafletpamphletflyer
brochure
 you mentioned that all the rooms had fridges. The problem was that the fridge in my suit didn't work properly
 during my staying. Moreover
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhandbillbooklethandoutleafletpamphletflyer
brochure
 claimed that there was a TV with Possible spelling mistake found.satellite
satellete
 TV channels, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 two local channels available and unfortunately they were not in English.

In addition
, there was mentioned
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhandbillbooklethandoutleafletpamphletflyer
brochure
 that the hotel located This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.meters
metres
 from the beach, due to the Possible spelling mistake found.filthyfishypithyfitly
fithy
 condition of the beach swimming became a dream for me. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, that in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhandbillbooklethandoutleafletpamphletflyer
brochure
 said that the hotel was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 minutes from the town Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you didn't mention it was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 minutes away by car.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhandbillbooklethandoutleafletpamphletflyer
brochure
 was misleading. As a result
, it would be better if you Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.organize
organise
 a partial refund This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 this was the worst holiday that I had ever had.

I look forward to receiving a prompt reply.

Yours faithfully
. 