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Dear Rishi. I am writing this letter to my apologise I cause unhappiness you ,which I went to the party at the time.

Dear Rishi. I am writing this letter to my apologise I cause unhappiness you, which I went to the party at the time. X7R5N
On July 18, I went to the party, and I saw you. I very be pleased, you to be my the dearest friend. Yesterday, I do incident case for you, forgiveness me. That event bring cause, is that I wet your clothes. First and foremost, You not stay at the party for that event. What is more, You were uncomfortable for leaving in the street. Last but not least, You took a chill yesterday, for I powered water to you clothes. Now, I apologise from my the dearest friend, for I did my works. I offer to meet you again. I hope you will apologise for the inconvinience that I caused. Yours faithfully.
On July 18, I went to the party, and I
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, you to be my the dearest friend. Yesterday, I do incident case for you, forgiveness me. That
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event
bring cause, is that I wet your clothes.
First
and foremost, You not stay at the party for that
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event
.
What is more
, You were uncomfortable for leaving in the street. Last
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but
not least, You took a chill yesterday, for I powered water to you clothes.
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Now
, I
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apologise
from my the dearest friend, for I did my works. I offer to
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meet
you again. I hope you will
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apologise
for the
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inconvinience
that I caused. Yours
faithfully
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IELTS letter Dear Rishi. I am writing this letter to my apologise I cause unhappiness you, which I went to the party at the time.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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