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Motivation letter Draft first edition without edits

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Introduce your background and support your application. Why are you a suitable candidate? Why have I chosen to apply to this programme? As a pharmacy graduate from Al-Zaytoonah University of Jordan who is aspiring to pursue my graduate studies in a related branch of science that is fast-growing and has the most impact on human life, biotechnology was the program of choice for me. In, particular, biotechnology is one of the most revolutionary and transformative fields of sciences today. Its importance lies upon the fact that the impact it has on human lives is tremendous and in multiple aspects, it has infiltrated plant, animal, and human systems. More significantly, its roll extends from enhancing plant cultivation to improving human health through drug discovery, vaccine production and genetic modification. For instance, the PCR test that the whole world relies upon to detect COVID-19 infection, and all the vaccines we take including those produced for coronavirus, all of that and many more have emerged with the help of biotechnology. Thus, after diving deeply into the realms of this science by taking the pharmaceutical biotechnology course at university, I developed a keen interest in biotechnology and decided that this is the field that I want to pursue in my future endeavors. Why did you apply to study in Hungary? As a pharmacy graduate who’s aspiring to pursue graduate studies in biotechnology, I was excited to know about Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship. In addition to the well-recognized, top-quality education in Hungary, it has the advantage of having an affordable living costs compared to the rest of Europe. Moreover, it has an international environment where there is a great opportunity to meet people from all around the world. Not to mention the vibrant cultural life and the amazing heritage sites all around the country. What challenges would you expect to encounter while studying in a foreign country, and how could you prepare for these challenges? Take them as an opportunity to increase my capacity to adapt. The challenges that I expect to encounter while studying in Hungary are the language barrier and the cultural differences. For the language barrier, I will prepare myself firstly by considering it as an opportunity to learn something new, then by taking an online preparatory course which will make it a lot easier for me when I get there. For the cultural differences, I will do extensive research on the internet to learn about the culture in Hungary as much as possible, which will make me well-prepared before getting there. Why does my background make me a suitable candidate? I possess the three fundamental characteristics: innate passion, preparatory knowledge, and fast-developing skills. Strong background in biology, chemistry and related subjects All of this will make me able to effectively achieve and contribute… Fortunately, I was able to work with my professor with some of her research and learn some laboratory techniques such as cell-culturing and RNA extraction What do I expect to gain from my studies? I expect to gain a deep understanding about biotechnology and acquire professional laboratory skills in the field, all of which will allow me to conduct proper research and be able to contribute in the advancement of this field which will eventually lead to the development of the society. Essential methods and techniques in biotechnology How will the programme help me to achieve my goals? With the knowledge and skills that will gain from this program, it will greatly help me pursue my future goal which is continuing further to PhD studies. How will you apply your new skills and qualifications when you return home? My long-term future goal is to establish international research groups that will work together in improving scientific knowledge and contributing in the development of humankind How does your proposed study relate to a particular development challenge or need at the global, national, and/or local level? The world constantly needs advancements in healthcare, whether in inventing easy diagnostics for diseases, or discovering new drugs, this is best achieved through biotechnology. The whole world is facing challenges in healthcare, there’s still incurable or difficult to treat diseases, and if there is they are quite expensive and not everyone can afford it. Thus biotechnology can come up with insightful ideas that will strongly impact the healthcare throughout the world. How will you apply your new skills and qualifications when you return home? The curriculum is practice-oriented and provides the necessary skills for graduates to start work immediately after graduation in the biotech or pharma industries or to enroll in a PhD program. The programme provides opportunities for students to become involved in research activities in various departments of the Faculties of Medicine and Science or to prepare diploma work in biotechnology-based SMEs (Small or Medium Enterprises) or in the pharmaceutical industry. The University is a member of the European Biotechnology Network, an association which actively supports the program.
Introduce your background and support your application.

Why are you a suitable candidate?

Why have I chosen to
apply
to this
programme
?

As a pharmacy
graduate
from
Al-Zaytoonah
University of Jordan who is aspiring to
pursue
my
graduate
studies
in a related branch of
science
that is
fast
-growing and has the most impact on
human
life, biotechnology was the
program
of choice for me. In, particular, biotechnology is one of the most revolutionary and transformative
fields
of
sciences
today
. Its importance lies upon the fact that the impact it has on
human
lives
is tremendous and in multiple aspects, it has infiltrated plant, animal, and
human
systems. More
significantly
, its roll extends from enhancing plant cultivation to improving
human
health through drug discovery, vaccine production and genetic modification.
For instance
, the PCR
test
that the whole
world
relies upon to detect COVID-19 infection, and all the vaccines we take including those produced for coronavirus, all of that and
many
more have emerged with the
help
of biotechnology.
Thus
, after diving
deeply
into the realms of this
science
by taking the pharmaceutical biotechnology course at university, I developed a keen interest in biotechnology and decided that this is the
field
that I want to
pursue
in my future endeavors.

Why did you
apply
to
study
in Hungary?

As a pharmacy
graduate
who’s aspiring to
pursue
graduate
studies
in biotechnology, I
was excited
to know about
Stipendium
Hungaricum
scholarship.

In addition
to the well-recognized, top-quality education in Hungary, it has the advantage of having an affordable living costs compared to the rest of Europe.
Moreover
, it has an international environment where there is a great
opportunity
to
meet
people
from all around the
world
. Not to mention the vibrant cultural life and the amazing heritage sites all around the country.

What
challenges
would you
expect
to encounter while studying in a foreign country, and how could you prepare for these challenges?

Take them as an
opportunity
to increase my capacity to adapt.

The
challenges
that I
expect
to encounter while studying in Hungary are the language barrier and the cultural differences. For the language barrier, I will prepare myself
firstly
by considering it as an
opportunity
to learn something
new
, then by taking an online preparatory course which will
make
it a lot easier for me when I
get
there. For the cultural differences, I will do extensive
research
on the internet to learn about the culture in Hungary as much as possible, which will
make
me well-prepared
before
getting there.

Why does my background
make
me a suitable candidate?

I possess the three fundamental characteristics: innate passion, preparatory knowledge, and
fast
-developing
skills
.

Strong background in biology, chemistry and related subjects

All of this will
make
me able to
effectively
achieve and contribute…

Fortunately
, I was able to
work
with my professor with
some
of her
research
and learn
some
laboratory techniques such as cell-culturing and RNA extraction

What do I
expect
to gain from my studies?

I
expect
to gain a deep understanding about biotechnology and acquire professional laboratory
skills
in the
field
, all of which will
allow
me to conduct proper
research
and be able to contribute in the advancement of this
field
which will
eventually
lead to the development of the society. Essential methods and techniques in
biotechnology


How will the
programme
help
me to achieve my goals?

With the knowledge and
skills
that will gain from this
program
, it will
greatly
help
me
pursue
my future goal which is continuing
further
to PhD studies.

How will you
apply
your
new
skills
and qualifications when you return home?

My long-term future goal is to establish international
research
groups that will
work
together in improving scientific knowledge and contributing in the development of humankind

How does your proposed
study
relate to a particular development
challenge
or need at the global, national, and/or local level?

The
world
constantly
needs advancements in healthcare, whether in inventing easy diagnostics for diseases, or discovering
new
drugs, this is best achieved through biotechnology. The whole
world
is facing
challenges
in healthcare, there’s
still
incurable or difficult to treat diseases, and if there is they are quite expensive and not everyone can afford it.
Thus
biotechnology can
come
up with insightful
ideas
that will
strongly
impact the healthcare throughout the world.

How will you
apply
your
new
skills
and qualifications when you return home?

The curriculum is practice-oriented and provides the necessary
skills
for
graduates
to
start
work
immediately after graduation in the biotech or pharma industries or to enroll in a PhD
program
. The
programme
provides
opportunities
for students to become involved in
research
activities in various departments of the Faculties of Medicine and
Science
or to prepare diploma
work
in biotechnology-based SMEs (
Small
or Medium Enterprises) or in the pharmaceutical industry.
The
University is a member of the European Biotechnology Network, an association which
actively
supports the
program
.
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IELTS letter Motivation letter Draft first edition without edits

Letter
  American English
23 paragraphs
814 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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