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Take care of house when you were on holiday

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Dear Peter, I got your letter yesterday and I am thankful to you that you agreed to look after my house and my pet Scooby while I am on holiday. I want to share contact details with you so that you can call me anytime. As I will be staying at Jumera Resort in Goa, the contact number for that place is 0172-501269. I will also ask to the Recepent of the resort to inform me as soon as possible when there will be any call for me. Apart from above, Let me give some information about my Pet. He is such a loving Dog and I am sure he will enjoy your presence. Please take him for the walk twice a day 6am in the moring and 7pm in eveving. The food for him has been kept in the kitchen drawer, you can find it easily. You can feed him twice after the walk. Other than this, please lock the main door before sleeping for your safety and do inform me if there you will face any issue. Best wishes, Alex

Dear Peter,

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got
 your letter Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).yesterday, and
yesterday and
 I am thankful to you that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 to look after my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and my pet Possible spelling mistake found.ScoopColbyCosbyAcuityBoobySnoopy
Scooby
 while I am on holiday.

I want to share contact This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 with you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that you can call me anytime. As I will be staying at Possible spelling mistake found.CameraJumperNumeralJumpersJudeaHumeral
Jumera
 Resort in Goa, the contact number for that place is 0172-501269. I will also
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ask to
 the Possible spelling mistake found.RecentRecipientPrecedentRepentReferentDecedent
Recepent
 of the resort to inform me as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible when there will be any call for me.

Apart from above, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information about my Pet. He is such a loving Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Dog, and
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 I am sure he will enjoy your presence. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 take him for the walk twice a day 6am in the Possible spelling mistake found.movingmorningboringmooringMorinmowing
moring
 and 7pm in Possible spelling mistake found.evening
eveving
. The food for him has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in the kitchen drawer, you can find it easily
. You can feed him twice after the walk.

Other than this, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 lock the main door This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 sleeping for your safety and do inform me if Please check whether a verb is missing here or whether 'there' should be 'their'.their you
there you
 will face any issue.

Best wishes,

Alex