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You are planning a vacation and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend.

You are planning a vacation and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. QVQpb
Hello Keerthi. How are you? Hope you are fine. Myself doing good here. I actually wanted to inform a plan that I have for summer vacation. That is going to vizag and vizit Araku as well. My plan is to travel by train after one week exactly on this day in the early morning at 4 am. We will start at our home 2 hours earlier to the train timings. May be it will be fine if you come to my home the day before we start our journey. And then we will reach home of my relatives by the afternoon. We will have lunch and take some rest there. After that we will go for a walk to the beach which is very close to our stay. We will enjoy sometime there and then visit some shopping malls nearby. The very next day we will start our journey to Araku, stay there for 2 days and enjoy the weather, culture and food as well. After completing all our schedules, we will return back to home. This is the plan for vacation. Please let me know if this is okay for you or do we have to change any timings. Yours lovingly dear friend.
Hello
Keerthi
. How are you? Hope you are fine. Myself doing
good
here. I actually wanted to inform a plan that I have for summer vacation.
That is
going to
vizag
and
vizit
Araku
as well
. My plan is to travel by train after one week exactly on this day in the early morning at 4 am. We will
start
at our home 2 hours earlier to the train timings.
May be
it will be fine if you
come
to my home the day
before
we
start
our journey. And then we will reach home of my relatives by the afternoon. We will have lunch and take
some
rest there. After that we will go for a walk to the beach which is
very
close to our stay. We will enjoy sometime there and then visit
some
shopping malls nearby. The
very
next
day we will
start
our journey to
Araku
, stay there for 2 days and enjoy the weather, culture and food
as well
. After completing all our schedules, we will
return back
to home. This is the plan for vacation.
Please
let
me know if this is okay for you or do we
have to
change
any timings. Yours
lovingly
dear friend.
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IELTS letter You are planning a vacation and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
204 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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