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Tell a story about your childhood

Tell a story about your childhood 6lE08

His brother came home with a weird box, we didn't know what was inside. I was curious, so I asked him what was inside and told him to open it. He was scared and asked me to open it because he thought I was brave. Suddenly, we heard a sound inside and a black cat jumped out of it. At first, I was surprised and about to scream, but when I looked at its big black eyes, I found out that it was really cute. On the contrary, he didn't like the cat. He suffered to me to bring the cat to take care of. Because it was cute, I was happy to be his owner. I gave him a lovely name and on the next day, I immediately bought him a pretty house, which is now placed under my bed. After the end of the day, I always played and took care of “Lily” - the name I gave to my own cat. Day by day, I got something stranger Lily did some activities like the cat I had lost in my childhood. She was attracted by my red carpet, climbed to the roof of my house. It almost made me cry. To find out if it was my cat back then or not, I asked his brother where he had found it. He said that it had been in the box in the corner of a street, which made me surprised because my back cat had been lost at the same place. I wanted to verify so I went home and asked my mum because she knew exactly what my last cat looked like. When she thought it was right, I was very surprised and full of happiness.

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asked
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asked
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