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Tell your friend about an article you found it. In the essay explain: where and when it was published what the article talks about why you think your friend should see it

Tell your friend about an article you found it. In the essay explain: where and when it was published what the article talks about why you think your friend should see it BJLKw
Dear Sash, How have you been doing? I am writing to check if you had the chance to look at our community newspaper, about the improvements they are planning to make it. I received this paper from our council yesterday, so check your mail if you haven’t done so, but I believe it is available online too. I found it interesting to share it with you because it is talking about all the chances they are planning to do in our neighbour. The plan is to have more open leisure spaces, which will be amazing, not just for us to meet up but also for our kids, since they will include a nice playground, for what I see, it will be good for both of us. Please, take a look while they are open for suggestions and changes to the original plan. I don’t think any of that will affect you in a bad way, but I thought it was better to make sure you saw it because you never know, right! ? I hope to see you soon, Julie
Dear Sash,

How have you been doing? I am writing to
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check
if you had the chance to look at our community newspaper, about the improvements they are planning to
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make
it.

I received this paper from our council yesterday,
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so
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check
your mail if you haven’t done
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,
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but
I believe it is available online too.

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found it interesting to share it with you
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because
it is talking about all the chances they are planning to do in our
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.
neighbour
. The plan is to have more open leisure spaces, which will be amazing, not
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just
for us to
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meet
up
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also
for our kids, since they will include a nice playground, for what I
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see
, it will be
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good
for both of us.

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Please
, take a look while they are open for suggestions and
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changes
to the original plan. I don’t
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think
any of that will affect you in a
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bad
way,
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but
I
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thought
it was better to
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sure you
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it
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you never know, right! ?

I hope to
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see
you
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Julie
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IELTS letter Tell your friend about an article you found it. In the essay explain: where and when it was published what the article talks about why you think your friend should see it

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  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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