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Write a letter to the manager of the hotel where you stayed Write about member of staff who helped you to solve a problem Introduce yourself Explain the situation What was the problem and who fixed it Offer to reward and the person in a certain way

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel where you stayed Write about member of staff who helped you to solve a problem Introduce yourself Explain the situation What was the problem and who fixed it Offer to reward and the person in a certain way 0AaG3
Dear Mr. Vishal, My name is Manmohan deep Singh and last week, I was on vacations for three days in Mumbai which I spent by staying in your hotel with my family. I want to thank to you and your team for making our trip rememberable and enjoyable. I specially want to thank Mr. Rahul for his work and service consideration for my family. Actually, what happened as we landed on the airport my mom fell down from the escalators which caused her a really bad fracture on right leg and some wounds on other body parts. It made the whole situation worse as it enabled her to move. We already booked first floor of your hotel but when I talked with Mr. Rahul on phone and explained him the whole situation, he changed our room to ground floor without any extra charges. After reaching at hotel, he called the doctor and provide all medications to my mom, Even the doctors were praising him for his prompt actions. I was afraid that I had to cancel my vocations but his efforts and dedication regarding his work saved my trip. What he has done for me cannot be paid by money or in any way, but I will feel happy and thankful if you give him the cheque of 500$ that I have attached with this letter as a token of my thanks. Your sincerely, Manmohan deep.
Dear Mr. Vishal,

My name is
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Manmohan
deep Singh and last week, I was on vacations for three days in Mumbai which I spent by staying in your hotel with my family. I want to thank to you and your team for making our trip rememberable and enjoyable. I
specially
want to thank Mr. Rahul for his work and service consideration for my family.

Actually, what happened as we landed on the airport my mom fell down from the escalators which caused her a
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
fracture on right leg and
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some
wounds on other body parts. It made the whole situation worse as it enabled her to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
. We already booked
first
floor of your hotel
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
when I talked with Mr. Rahul on phone and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
The verb 'to explain something to someone' requires a preposition.
him
the whole situation, he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
our room to
This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?
ground floor
without any extra charges. After reaching at hotel, he called the doctor and provide all medications to my mom, Even the doctors were praising him for his prompt actions. I was afraid that I had to cancel my vocations
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
his efforts and dedication regarding his work saved my trip.

What he has done for me cannot
be paid
by money or in any way,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I will feel happy and thankful if you give him the
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
of
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$500".
500$
that I have attached with this letter as a token of my thanks.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Manmohan
deep.

IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager of the hotel where you stayed Write about member of staff who helped you to solve a problem Introduce yourself Explain the situation What was the problem and who fixed it Offer to reward and the person in a certain way

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  American English
6 paragraphs
236 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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