Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Write a letter to a friend and ask him her to look after your house in your absence give reasons for your travel and any specific instructions requests

Write a letter to a friend and ask him her to look after your house in your absence give reasons for your travel and any specific instructions requests g5qj3

Dear Mani, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health. As you already know my head office is located in New Delhi and I’ve to visit for my business work next week. This business project is crucial for me because I’m going to represent my company at international level. Moreover, it will be very beneficial for my career growth. I’ll be dropping my house keys at my neighbours place so that you can easily collect them. I’ve already stored enough groceries for you and I believe it will be sufficient for a week. I’ve installed a new security system in the house. In case of emergency press the red button which is located behind the sofa in the hall to get help. I’ll be back on the weekend. It will be of great help if you agree to stay and take care of my house. We can see each other when I come back. Just let me know if it’s not possible so that I can make alternative arrangements. Talk to you soon. Lovingly, simran

Dear Mani,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health.

As you already know my head office is located
 in New Delhi and I’ve to visit for my business work next
 week. This business project is crucial for me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I’m going to represent my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 at international level. Moreover
, it will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 beneficial for my career growth.

I’ll be dropping my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 keys at my Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
 place This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that you can easily
 collect them. I’ve already stored This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 groceries for you and I believe it will be sufficient for a week. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’ve installed a new security system in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. In case of emergency press the red button which is located
 behind the sofa in the hall to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
.

I’ll be back on the weekend. It will be of great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 to stay and take care of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. We can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 each other when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if it’s not possible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 alternative arrangements.

Talk to you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Lovingly
,

Possible spelling mistake found.simiansim ran
simran