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Write a letter to your friend who asked you to give some suggestion to his son is coming to your country Tell him which city he should go to how he can get a job how he can make friends

Write a letter to your friend who asked you to give some suggestion to his son is coming to your country Tell him which city he should go to how he can get a job how he can make friends GM3nB

I hope this mail finds you in radiant health. It made me delightful that your son Rishab is coming to my country on work visa. It is an Honour for me that you have asked for my suggestion and I would be pleased to help him. Canada is one of the famous country in the world. All cities are well developed but Toronto would be the best option for your Rishab. It is full of national and multinational companies, restaurants and hotel industry so finding a job would be easy here rather than other cities. Most importantly, the weather is always joyful and constant here in between summer and winter. Other cities like Winnipeg and Alberta are also good but in winter season or especially in snow their work or employment rate goes down because of low temperature. As I am living in Toronto with my family. We live in apartment so he can stay with us. Our building is located in main downtown so it would be easy for him to find more work places. There are so many places where people usually hangouts with their friends like gardens, clubs and so on which will enable him to make new friends. Even my neighborhood is very friendly which will avoid his homesickness. Let me know about the exact date and time of his flight as soon as possible so I can make arrangements. Hoping to see Rishab soon! Yours lovingly, Manmohan

I hope this mail finds you in radiant health. It made me delightful that your son Possible spelling mistake found.Rishabh
Rishab
 is coming to my country on work visa. It is an Possible spelling mistake. 'Honour' is British English.Honor
Honour
 for me that you have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitedrequested
asked for
 my suggestion and I would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 him.

Canada is one of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 country in the world. All cities are This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-developed
well developed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 Toronto would be the best option for your Possible spelling mistake found.Rishabh
Rishab
. It is full of national and multinational This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
, restaurants and hotel industry This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 finding a job would be easy here rather
 than other cities. Most importantly
, the weather is always joyful and constant here in between summer and winter. Other cities like Winnipeg and Alberta are also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in winter season or especially
 in snow their work or employment rate goes down This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of low temperature.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 I am living in Toronto with my family. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in apartment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 he can stay with us. Our building is located
 in main downtown This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it would be easy for him to find more work places. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 places where This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
usually
 hangouts with their friends like gardens, clubs and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on which will enable him to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 new friends. Even my neighborhood is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 friendly which will avoid his homesickness. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know about the exact date and time of his flight as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 arrangements.

Hoping to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
Possible spelling mistake found.Rishabh
Rishab
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
!

Yours lovingly
,

Possible spelling mistake found.MansonMandolinSamoanAngolanFeynmanMinoan
Manmohan