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tell them that you wil start late at work

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Dear Sir, First of all I would like to thank you for hiring me as an Associate Engineer in you company. I will give my one hundred and one percent to prove that you have made the right choice in selecting me out of all applicant. The reason I am also writing this letter I forgot to informed during the signing of contract that I am scheduled for an operation next week. I was diagnosed with a gallstones and according to my physician the surgery needed to be done as early as possible in order to avoid complications. He also advised that I need to a bed rest after the operation minimum of one month just to ensure the wound will heal accordingly. The doctor will only provide a fit to work letter only after I have completed the required bed rest. Attached in this letter my medical abstract and also the scheduled surgery. I do hope this will not be a hindrance on my employment as I really would like to work in your company. Yours truly, Mark Lester Marte
Dear Sir,

First of all
I would like to thank you for hiring me as an Associate Engineer in you
company
. I will give my one hundred and one percent to prove that you have made the right choice in selecting me out of all applicant.

The reason I am
also
writing this letter I forgot to informed during the signing of contract that I
am scheduled
for an operation
next
week. I
was diagnosed
with a gallstones and according to my physician the surgery needed to
be done
as early as possible in order to avoid complications. He
also
advised that I need to a bed rest after the operation minimum of one month
just
to ensure the wound will heal
accordingly
.

The doctor will
only
provide a fit to work letter
only
after I have completed the required bed rest. Attached in this letter my medical abstract and
also
the scheduled surgery. I do hope this will not be a hindrance on my employment as I
really
would like to work in your
company
.

Yours
truly
,

Mark Lester
Marte
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IELTS letter tell them that you wil start late at work

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  American English
6 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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