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A local sports council is looking for people to do voluntary/ unpaid work. write a letter to the organisers the sports event to apply for unpaid work.

A local sports council is looking for people to do voluntary/ unpaid work. write a letter to the organisers the sports event to apply for unpaid work. pRglw
Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am hereby writing this letter with regards to my interest in voluntarism for the local sports event. The reason of my voluntarism is to encourage the sports activities in young generation as nowadays youngsters like to play screen games rather than outdoor sports. Moreover, these types of sports events may result in the broadening of parents’ mind who believe academics to be more important for their children instead of physical activities. To start with skills, I have good organizational skills that can be helpful for the sports event as I have accomplished the event management certificate. Moreover, being a sports man, I can also assist in training of the participants, if you will need any help in that. Apart from the organizing event and guiding in training of the participants, I can help in this event in several ways such as handling refreshments for audience and participants and ensuring the participants are provided with all the necessary things. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Robison
Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope you are doing well. I am hereby writing this letter
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
with regards to
my interest in voluntarism for the local
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sports
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
.

The reason of my voluntarism is to encourage the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
activities in young generation as nowadays youngsters like to play screen games
rather
than outdoor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
.
Moreover
, these types of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
may result in the broadening of parents’ mind who believe academics to be more
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important
for their children
instead
of physical activities.

To
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start
with
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skills
, I have
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good
organizational
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skills
that can be helpful for the
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sports
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event
as I have accomplished the
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event
management certificate.
Moreover
, being a
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sports
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
, I can
also
assist in training of the
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participants
, if you will need any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in that.

Apart from the organizing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
and guiding in training of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
participants
, I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
in several ways such as handling refreshments for audience and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
participants
and ensuring the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
participants
are provided
with all the necessary things.

Looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Robison
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IELTS letter A local sports council is looking for people to do voluntary/ unpaid work. write a letter to the organisers the sports event to apply for unpaid work.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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