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A friend write you a email about an English course and what type of activities you are going to decide with her to do

A friend write you a email about an English course and what type of activities you are going to decide with her to do Nrq2y

Dear Maria: Hello! I'm so excited doing that English course but also I can wait to see you soon. If I'm sincere with you I can't decide about what type of activities we're going to do because I love both. For example, horse riding is a fantastic activity because the fresh air and the connection with nature. But I feel like a fish under the water when I'm swimming. I think the best option is that you decide the type of activities that you like the most, I will be totally okay with the decision you make about this theme. So I think it's up to you to make the final decision about this, I will be accord whatever you decide. I'm going to count the days until the course. Love and kisses, Bea.

Dear Maria:

Hello!

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love
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But
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 about this theme.

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 the final decision about this, I will be accord whatever you decide.

I'm going to count the days until the course.

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Love
 and kisses,

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