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A friend write you a email about an English course and what type of activities you are going to decide with her to do

A friend write you a email about an English course and what type of activities you are going to decide with her to do Nrq2y
Dear Maria: Hello! I'm so excited doing that English course but also I can wait to see you soon. If I'm sincere with you I can't decide about what type of activities we're going to do because I love both. For example, horse riding is a fantastic activity because the fresh air and the connection with nature. But I feel like a fish under the water when I'm swimming. I think the best option is that you decide the type of activities that you like the most, I will be totally okay with the decision you make about this theme. So I think it's up to you to make the final decision about this, I will be accord whatever you decide. I'm going to count the days until the course. Love and kisses, Bea.
Dear Maria:

Hello!

I'm
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so
excited doing that English course
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but
also
I can wait to
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see
you
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soon
.

If I'm sincere with
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you
I can't decide about what type of activities we're going to do
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because
I
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love
both.
For example
, horse riding is a fantastic activity
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because
the fresh air and the connection with nature.
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But
I feel like a fish under the water when I'm swimming.

I
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think
the best option is that you decide the type of activities that you like the most, I will be
totally
okay with the decision you
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make
about this theme.

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So
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it's up to you to
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make
the final decision about this, I will be accord whatever you decide.

I'm going to count the days until the course.

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Love
and kisses,

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Bea
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IELTS letter A friend write you a email about an English course and what type of activities you are going to decide with her to do

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  American English
9 paragraphs
134 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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