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Write a letter to a book shop manager about a book you’re looking for, ask him to find the book and send it to you.

Write a letter to a book shop manager about a book you’re looking for, ask him to find the book and send it to you. RNMgM
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request you for a Book 'The Miracle Morning' by Hal Elrod'. My psychologist suggest me to read this book as she says that it would be beneficial to read for me. I have searched this book at various book stores and online also However, I could not find it yet. One of my friend gave me your reference because he is your regular customer. He said that if any request is put on your bookstore, you make that book available for your customers. This book is very important for me so I request you to provide me as soon as possible. When the book is available on your store, Please notify me via a mail or phone. I shall come and collect it. My e-mail Id physio. lavisha@gmail. com and my contact number is 9068524691. I shall be very thankful for this kind gesture. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, John
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to request you for a
Book
'The Miracle Morning' by Hal
Elrod
'.

My psychologist suggest me to read this
book
as she says that it would be beneficial to read for me. I have searched this
book
at various
book
stores and online
also
However
, I could not find it
yet
. One of my friend gave me your reference
because
he is your regular customer. He said that if any request
is put
on your bookstore, you
make
that
book
available for your customers.

This
book
is
very
important
for me
so
I request you to provide me as
soon
as possible. When the
book
is available on your store,
Please
notify me via a mail or phone. I shall
come
and collect it. My e-mail
Id
physio.
lavisha@gmail
.
com
and my contact number is 9068524691. I shall be
very
thankful for this kind gesture.

Hoping to hear from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

John
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a book shop manager about a book you’re looking for, ask him to find the book and send it to you.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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