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lthough you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.Write a letter to thecollege enrolment officer. In your letter●explain why you are writing●describe your circumstances●ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Dear Sir or Madam, I have recently read about the new MSc course on Computer Science in the university and I'm really interested. I'm writing this letter to ask if an exception could be made regarding the admission requirements. I don't have the required bachelor degree in Computer Science, in fact I've never had the opportunity to study formally so I don't have any academic background in computer related courses. However, I have always been interested in computer and I have been working as a c++ developer for the past 10 years. I consider myself a senior developer and I think I'm capable of jumping straight to the MSc program. I'm aware that professional experience does not always replace academic studies, but I wonder if a special exception could be made in my case. I can provide proof of my work experience and perform any admission test needed. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I have recently read about the new MSc course on Computer Science in the university and I'm
really
interested. I'm writing this letter to ask if an exception could
be made
regarding the admission requirements.

I don't have the required bachelor degree in Computer Science, in fact I've never had the opportunity to study
formally
so
I don't have any academic background in computer related courses.
However
, I have always
been interested
in computer and I have been working as a c++ developer for the past 10 years. I consider myself a senior developer and I
think
I'm capable of jumping straight to the MSc program.

I'm aware that professional experience does not always replace academic studies,
but
I wonder if a special exception could
be made
in my case. I can provide proof of my work experience and perform any admission
test
needed.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter lthough you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to thecollege enrolment officer. In your letter●explain why you are writing●describe your circumstances●ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Letter
  American English
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150 words
7.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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