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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear sir/madam, I am an Intern of textile company who attended a meeting last night at your hotel. All the arrangements and efforts by your staff members was remarkable. The main purpose of writing this letter is that I forgot one of my most important document in your hotel. I remember very clearly that the folder was in my hand throughout the meeting. After the tea break I got a call from my brother that my mother is not well I rushed to the hospital and I was in so hurry that I forgot my papers on the tea table. The file contain all my original education certificates along with my licence and identity card. These documents are basic requirements to apply for further studies in designing University. I will be really thankful if you will help me to find my stuff. I heard about your lost and found department it is my humble request if you could kindly check it whether my belongings are with someone in that area. Kindly give me a call on 8476 80851 if you find my folder. Yours sincerely, Ramsha Asad Abbas
Dear sir/madam, I am an Intern of textile
company
who attended a meeting last night at your hotel. All the arrangements and efforts by your staff members was remarkable. The main purpose of writing this letter is that I forgot one of my most
important
document in your hotel. I remember
very
clearly
that the folder was in my hand throughout the meeting. After the tea break I
got
a call from my brother that my mother is not well I rushed to the hospital and I was in
so
hurry that I forgot my papers on the tea table. The file contain all my original education certificates along with my licence and identity card. These documents are basic requirements to apply for
further
studies in designing University. I will be
really
thankful if you will
help
me to find my stuff. I heard about your lost and found department it is my humble request if you could kindly
check
it whether my belongings are with someone in that area. Kindly give me a call on 8476 80851 if you find my folder.

Yours
sincerely
, Ramsha Asad Abbas
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IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
187 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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